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Hi Roxy here!
This is such a cute and pick-me-up poem! Just what everyone needs!
I wish it was a bit longer only because I want to read more of it and want to bask imn the happyness tht it brings me!
The rhyming is cute and I love the last two lines!
All in all I love this poem!
Keep it up!
Saily, nice job with rhythm and rhyme. It is short, but perhaps you can extend by adding a few more lines, yet keeping the rhythm. Super cute, keep writing. Hurtado
that is so freaking cute!
Hi there!
Other than adding to it, and what my predecessor already wrote, I think this is great! I would love to see more!
This, despite being so very short, is excellent! I feel like you could easily expand this. It's very beautiful
Keep writing!
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A very cute little poem! I love that it has a consistent rhythm and rhyme scheme. Also it's nice that you use so many words that start with some- in only four verses. There's a tiny little thing though: I think worthwile is written as one word, and not two.