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Luke14

  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Broken Records

    This feels like such and honest, and real poem, the last line, "Listening to an echo of the same damn song." Is a line I can relate to in particular. ...

    Sep 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: falling in a forest

    From reading this, I feel like the tree could symbolize life, or a life, a specific one. One that has fallen from a once good place. People stood and stared, ...

    Sep 25, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Brighter Days

    This poem just flows so smoothly, i'd love to hear it sung. They rhyme scheme just sticks like glue to your head, so pleasantly. I don't quite relate to this, ...

    Jan 11, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Human

    This poem gets into my head so well. There are a lot of poems and songs called human, but this one actually studies what it means to be one. How ...

    Jan 11, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Walls of the heart

    The pieces of your new walls, must be the lessons you have learned. For your heart must adapt. Whenever made the walls all fall before, can't make them fall again. ...

    Jan 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A realization

    I like the imagery in the line, "glittering and sparkling," it creates a fuzzy feeling within me. "I can make Life more beautiful for others, and in consequence, Life is ...

    Dec 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: History

    I love this poem! I completely agree with this statement. When on person makes a mistake, sees the problems it caused, it is likely this person won't do it again, ...

    Dec 26, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Anxiety

    This connects to me on a personal level, these are all things that I have felt and thought. I am very aware of what people thing of me, and I ...

    Dec 26, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Burning

    This story i've gotten out of this, is that the speaker is involved with someone who is, painful, to be around. But I do belive it's possible, they are not ...

    Dec 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Life

    I like the part that says, "Ponder this and all questions left untouched and unnoticed." As if to say, we can only think about it, we can never, truely, answer ...

    Dec 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Fuel

    First, I really like the line, "I live on it, Drink it, Eat it." This is great imagery, saying that the pain that has been inflicted on you, can only ...

    Dec 24, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Beating Me

    I can clearly see the speaker talks of someone who perhaps has hurt them, but the speakers will not express this maybe because her heart won't let her. Maybe the ...

    Dec 24, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Simple Love Story

    I love this poem! I 100% stand by it. Love should be anyone's game. Whatever you want out of it, likely someone else will have the same intrest as you. ...

    Dec 24, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Nothing but a dance

    So first we start with, "You walk around me, I walk around you." This is perhaps the first meeting of the two charcaters. The two are checking each other out, ...

    Dec 24, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I am from

    First thing I wanna say, Live long and prosper. Anyway, I love the theming of this poem. This idea of your inspirations influencing you, is just all too familar. And ...

    Dec 24, 2018


"Be yourself" is not advice. It's an existential crisis waiting to happen.
— Hank Green