This was really good, it flowed nicely, and has good word choice. It's deep. (Is that the word I'm looking for?) And I really enjoyed it. However, I feel like there should be some punctuation. For questions, there are question marks, but you didn't add periods. That just seems odd to me.
Other then that, it's a very good poem, and I look forward to seeing more from you!
As always, keep writing, and enjoy doing so!
Points: 6251
Reviews: 461
Donate