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Hmm... no reviews? I shall review :) Nit-picks/ comments on your piece first, the overall comments: A monk meditates in the morning light As far as first lines go yours ...

Let's see... nitpicks first? [quote]Stairs. Stairs? There are many stairs. So Do you think too would work better here? On second glance... no, no so works just fine. many stairs. ...

I've owed you a review for a long time, and it is time you got it, even if I am slightly late, lol. Okay, [s]rip to shreds?[/s] Fix the few ...

I really liked this poem, I wouldn't say loved as I think that's a term that's too lightly tossed around, but I certainly enjoyed it. The imagery was beautiful *Will ...

Hmm... there's some things that could be improved upon, but you certainly have lots of potential :) I've decided to do a line by line critique, as I feel it ...

Hey Monki :D I had this dream. I was on my bike, just pedaling, frantically looking for something. I don't remember what it was. Maybe I didn't even know what ...

Okay, I liked this poem. I'm kind of tired just now, so this review may not be of the best quality. Let's start: I watch the beauty of the stallions ...

Something to critique from my dear Lauren. Why was not I told of this before? I second your proclamations of being being a grammar geek, because you are, which is ...

WARNING! Some of this may contain graphic or obscure things that may not be suitable for children. Prologue "In which we meet two men, the shepherd and a lamb." “Murder ...

Shina :D Kirsten here, to do the first of your eight prize reviews, lol. Anyway, seeing as this is meant to be long, indepth and actually good we better get ...

Hey :D This is a lovely poem, it's so charming and cute (: Really beautiful. Now, shall we? I remember when the world was new, Right, I really love this ...

Hey there Midnight (: I really enjoyed this poem, I love the Romeo and Juliet theme. Now, onto the poem:- Teardrops fall with the rain, I like thiks as a ...

Okay, no one has done a whole story review, so I'll do that first, and then I'll do overall comments: It snowed one winter. Quite an unusual year that turned ...

Hey Evi :D I've decided to review something of yours, 'cuz I love your stuff (: I'll go over your poem first then comments Butterflies used to dance all around ...

hahah :lol: Personally I think it happens to be rather incredible :lol: And yes, I'm trying to steal a review from this :twisted: sparkology? :lol: I can imagine this as ...