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Los3rLov3

  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: If I Were You...

    Hello there! Firstly, I honestly almost cried at the last stanza. You have a lyrical flow to your words that I just love. The emotions are wonderfully crafted and I ...

    Jul 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Sweets

    Hello There! Firstly, I loved your poem. One of the best I've read in fact. I can't really think of what you can improve on so let's focus on things ...

    Jul 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Sometimes I Feel...

    Hello There! Firstly, I loved this poem, and I thought it was a great representation of your feelings. There isn't really something I think you could improve on, but I ...

    Jul 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: A Locket

    Hello los3r lov3 here for a crappy review! Firstly this was a lovely poem. I don't have many true friends so I'm not sure how it feels first hand but ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Lovelorn

    Hello, Los3r Lov3 here for a crappy review I really enjoyed your little poem. You did great with the wording and grammar. Not even One mistake! You also did great ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: A Shock Absorber's Story.

    Hello, los3r lov3 here. This was a lovely poem. I'm not sure how you could interpret the lines but I saw it as inspirational. If that's what you were going ...

    Feb 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Steel Toe Boots

    Hello Los3r Lov3 here. I had to do a review so why not on your poem. Firstly this was a great poem I enjoyed it. One thing I found you ...

    Feb 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Honey, I Can't Pay the Rent

    Hello, I have to do a review so I might as well do one on your poem. This was a great poem! I quite enjoyed it. You did a great ...

    Feb 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: For Lareine

    Wow, anyway. Hello, I have to do a review so why not on your poem. This was a well written poem. I found one grammatical error though. "knew the hidden ...

    Feb 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: And It's Over

    Hello, I had to do a review so I thought why not on your poem. :3 This poem was excellent. You described how most people feel as we lose a ...

    Feb 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cola Can Romance

    Hello, I have to do a review so why not on your poem. This was a good poem, I really enjoyed it. Anything you could improve is wording. I'm a ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: The Song Replays

    Hello, This was a great poem. I love how this poem can be perceive as a different meaning to each person who reads it. To me it's what's behind the ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Blimp

    Hello ~ Emily here. I really liked your poem. Something you could improve is maybe making it a bit more clear. I'm not good at poetry but I love reading ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: The Forest

    Wow. This poem was amazing! It truly captures what is wrong about humanity and selfishness. I believe you did great in describing how the person felt. Something you could improve ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When it's nine

    I have to do a review, so why not on your lovely poem. I thought this was brilliant! You did great on wording and describing in your poem. If you ...

    Feb 8, 2016


The things you are passionate about are not random, they are your calling.
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