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Los3rLov3

  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: If I Were You...

    Hello there! Firstly, I honestly almost cried at the last stanza. You have a lyrical flow to your words that I just love. The emotions are wonderfully crafted and I ...

    Jul 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Sweets

    Hello There! Firstly, I loved your poem. One of the best I've read in fact. I can't really think of what you can improve on so let's focus on things ...

    Jul 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Sometimes I Feel...

    Hello There! Firstly, I loved this poem, and I thought it was a great representation of your feelings. There isn't really something I think you could improve on, but I ...

    Jul 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: A Locket

    Hello los3r lov3 here for a crappy review! Firstly this was a lovely poem. I don't have many true friends so I'm not sure how it feels first hand but ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Lovelorn

    Hello, Los3r Lov3 here for a crappy review I really enjoyed your little poem. You did great with the wording and grammar. Not even One mistake! You also did great ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: A Shock Absorber's Story.

    Hello, los3r lov3 here. This was a lovely poem. I'm not sure how you could interpret the lines but I saw it as inspirational. If that's what you were going ...

    Feb 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Steel Toe Boots

    Hello Los3r Lov3 here. I had to do a review so why not on your poem. Firstly this was a great poem I enjoyed it. One thing I found you ...

    Feb 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Honey, I Can't Pay the Rent

    Hello, I have to do a review so I might as well do one on your poem. This was a great poem! I quite enjoyed it. You did a great ...

    Feb 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: For Lareine

    Wow, anyway. Hello, I have to do a review so why not on your poem. This was a well written poem. I found one grammatical error though. "knew the hidden ...

    Feb 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: And It's Over

    Hello, I had to do a review so I thought why not on your poem. :3 This poem was excellent. You described how most people feel as we lose a ...

    Feb 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cola Can Romance

    Hello, I have to do a review so why not on your poem. This was a good poem, I really enjoyed it. Anything you could improve is wording. I'm a ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: The Song Replays

    Hello, This was a great poem. I love how this poem can be perceive as a different meaning to each person who reads it. To me it's what's behind the ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Blimp

    Hello ~ Emily here. I really liked your poem. Something you could improve is maybe making it a bit more clear. I'm not good at poetry but I love reading ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: The Forest

    Wow. This poem was amazing! It truly captures what is wrong about humanity and selfishness. I believe you did great in describing how the person felt. Something you could improve ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When it's nine

    I have to do a review, so why not on your lovely poem. I thought this was brilliant! You did great on wording and describing in your poem. If you ...

    Feb 8, 2016


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