LittleLee

Hey there, Dossereana! I hope you're having a good day! Okay, i haven't read the previous chapters, but I peeked in here and thought I'd drop off a review. The ...

Hey there, MC! After reading your story, I must wonder... dos that stand for Main Character? *gasps* Am I just a side character? If this is the Netflix adaptation it ...

Wow, Spencer, this is a fantastic poem! I don't know what to say! Every line was very well thought out, the diction was apt, and the setting was really perfect ...

Hello, Rubes, Lee's here to review your work! You wrote a piece on why we love a place, didn't you? This is quite a nice follow-up to that. However, this ...

Good day to you, Purple67! Hmm, this is quite a short introduction. It can be moulded into almost anything, so it's a little saddening to know that you probably won't ...

Hey there, Adrian! I hope you're having a good day! I'll get right into it. Approaching its victim suspiciously on a dark street, a walking shadow appeared out of nowhere. ...

Hey there, Nirvan! I'll begin by saying that I like the structure you followed. It looked like a poem at first, but this actually suits what you've written; it grants ...

Greetins, WarriorMingan! Lee's here to drop a review for your lovely poem! I'll let you know right away that I think you've chosen a good, solid subject to write on. ...

Greetings, Alfredo! Wow, this story is quite something, huh? Short and simple with no lengthy backstories. I like it. The diction was pretty good and created some fetching visuals, and ...

Hello and welcome to YWS, hearthewhiskeringthereagain! Oof, this is quite the story you've got here. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. The personification of the Sun and Moon was ...

Hey, Quirks! Lee's here to drop off a quick review! This poem manages to captivate your audience quite well because of how relatable it is. A lot of us have ...

Hey there unicorn, I hope you're having a good day! This is quite the story you got here! I see some promising worldbuilding, interesting characters, and a solid magic system. ...

Hello, Underwriter, and welcome to the site! It's nice to see that you took no time in sharing your work with the rest of us. Your story was quite interesting ...

Nice chapter, although Carris's interaction with Laura felt a bit unrealistic. She alternates between being rude and nice without it actually affected anything Laura does or says. Until now Carris ...

This chapter was good. Frustrating in a good way, too; the characters aren't able to wing their way through every situation just because they're MCs. The way the guards casually ...