LiptonCookie

I like the title, it ties in well with your general idea that you're trying to emphasis. You used interesting and clear metaphors and figurative language. You also used the ...

This really came on strong. The emotions of the mother, her loath and despise for her baby felt very compelling, to me. The way you worded things and made it ...

This was very mysterious and I, subjectively believe that this really spoke to me. You executed this nicely and stuck with your idea all throughout, making your poem consistent and ...

Hello! That's an interesting poem you have there, though it can be improved. In the second stanza you used "sweat" instead of "sweet", that can easily be fixed. Another grammatical ...

This poem is so cute. I like the idea you have behind it and how you slowly developed the general theme of the poem. Though you can work on your ...

Hello! Interesting poem, the title caught my attention from the start. I exaggerate but it does follow me. Though I can clearly see what you're trying to say here, I ...

Well, I see how this is rated 16+ xD. That escalated quickly...anyways...onwards. I love how uniformed you are throughout the poem. Your poem is well-developed and you never strayed from ...

Whoa. This sounds realistic, just as the genres state. I like what you've managed to write during an anxiety attack--it can be scary. I don't have much to review as ...

Very nice. It's pretty neat, if you ask me. And you just joined, hello fellow newcomer! First of all, you developed the poem's story nicely. It was organized well and ...

Very nice idea short story. My thoughts review-like: Perhaps you can make your sentences flow more so that the reader understands it better. Additionally, I suggest you come out stronger ...

This is a great poem and as the genre suggests, it really humored me. I commend you for the idea and wow, I see the massive emphasis on how unhealthy ...

Hello! IF this indeed is your first poem ever, it's not that bad for beginning making one! Interesting message you have backing your poem here. Maybe you could better develop ...

Hello! This was a nice poem ^^ It was concise yet informative of the message you were trying to get across. I like the theme going on, obviously regarding sticks ...

This is a great poem! The way you began the poem was very eye catching and introduced of the series of events you managed to eloquently consolidate into poetry! Your ...

Very deep. The poem itself was well thought out. You put just the right words in to give us the fullest effect of the words and meaning. It empowered me ...