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Lightsong

Lightsong

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lips

    Hey, I'm here for a quick review! :D As you might aware, I like this. The exploration of lips, as simple as they could be, is refreshing. It takes me ...

    Jan 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: The Quest for Fire Book One ~ Into the Mists Chapter 9

    This review is brought to you by Read and Review shop Hey, I'm here to review as requested! :D Nitpicks. The next morning Zoltar woke up bright and early. Comma ...

    Jan 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Learning to Let Go

    Hey! I'm here for a quick review! :D First of all, I just want to say I like the rhythm of this poem. It's consistent, and the beat is close ...

    Jan 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Silence

    Hey! I'm here for a quick review. Welcome to YWS, by the way! :D Okay, since this poem does have punctuations like commas and a period, I do hope they ...

    Jan 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: The Quest for Fire Book One ~ Into the Mists Chapter 8

    This review is brought to you by Read and Review Shop First of all, I'm so, so sorry for my unforgivable lateness to review this. I've been busy nowadays, and ...

    Jan 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Firegirl (1)

    Hey! I'm here for a quick review (since I'm using my phone >.>)! It must have still been early, because I looked around, and thank god, no one noticed me. ...

    Jan 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Winnie the Punk

    Hey, I'm here for a quick review! :D First of all, your piece reminds me of my online friend's because of the short paragraphs. It's interesting. It makes for a ...

    Jan 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: Bad Seed (extract)

    This review is brought to you by Read and Review Shop Hey, I'm here to review! Sorry for the very long wait! :D First off, I'm not going to talk ...

    Jan 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Goodnight Reality

    Hey, I'm here for a quick review. I'm not good at poetry, so bear with me. "So this is what it must be like to feel high without any of ...

    Jan 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: My Depression

    Hey, I'm here for a quick review. :D Oh my god, I definitely love your format! Short lines are absolutely the way to go! I like the pauses between them, ...

    Jan 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: hopeless

    Hey, I'm here for a quick review. :D So this poem is simple, and because of that, delivers its message effectively. There's no kicking in the bush or going for ...

    Jan 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Glass & Ashes

    Hey, I'm here to review! The title caught my attention. :D Anyway, I'm going to go with nit-pickiness first. Her name was Mason, and she was looking for her shoe- ...

    Jan 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Shaping Faith: Chapter 14

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D Nitpicks first. :3 Verona followed the woman, who she recognized as Nyra, into the elevator without a sound. I can see commas here although ...

    Jan 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: 14

    Hey. :D So this is a poem with a typical theme. Hmm... I'll rip it apart. I gave my all for you This is quite a cliche, telling line, and ...

    Jan 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fanfiction Re: Tiger, Tiger Burning Bright

    This review is brought to you by Read and Review Shop Hey, I'm here to review as requested. :D I see that this is a rhyming poem, and I like ...

    Dec 31, 2015


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