Laurenh6

Hi there! First off, I'd like to say that you've wrote something really cool here - it's actually quite relatable the whole dating scenario. Makes me think of first dates ...

I just wanted to say this is really awesome - the rhythm and rhyme of this poem makes it such an easy read with such good flow and it was ...

Hi there! I really found this interesting.. I like story and it's saddening atmosphere of the missing piece in the main character's life. I also like the informal, almost humorous ...

Oh my gosh- wow this is epic! I absolutely love how this is written in the different stages displaying a development of thoughts through the examination day ...something I can ...

Hi there! This is a really interesting piece of work - allowing us to see the perspective of the internet, if it had one. I really like how you've personified ...

Hey there! I just wanted to say that this is a really awesome bit of writing. I really admire how you've created the dialogue to be so dramatic and it ...

Hey there! What you've written here is so powerful and quite relatable in many ways. I see the point you've conveyed, it's almost like we're persuading ourselves that we don't ...

This is so powerful, and considering that my best friend is actually gay I can totally empathise with it, as I've seen how some people treat her differently due to ...

Hi there! I just wanted to say that this is really awesome and it flows so well! You've got a talent for writing! I really like the part where you ...

This is a really powerful piece of work, I truly admire how you've highlighted this topic - something that many may not even have considered otherwise; raising awareness for DIY ...

Hi there! I'm really interested by what you've written here, it's very fast pace and straight to the point and I'm guessing it's a summary of what happened before you ...

Hey there! Wow this is really intriguing - I was intrigued firstly by the title and thought it created a lot of ambiguity in regards to what this was about ...

Hi there! I just want to say , you've got a talent for writing lyrics, as all of it flowed really well .. And some of it was actually quite ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this, I thought it consisted of a lot of detail about Galeym , and I like how you included things about their language. Also, ...

Hey there! I really like the message behind this poem, you've portrayed this family as the centre focus of the poem - the man is only mentioned briefly and I ...