Lauren2010

Hey there, Hannah! First of all, I adore your prose. It's very poetic, but not in an overbearing way! There were a few places where it got hard to understand ...

Stella! How did I not know you posted more of this? You know I can't resist! Anyways, I really like what you're doing with Charlie and Gen here. I like ...

Hi Soul! :D So I know you're not finished with this, but I love worlbuilding and legends and creations and so I thought I'd leave my thoughts/suggestions/advice for how you ...

Hi BookLover! This is a sweet little story! I like the sentiment a lot, of meeting the person you might spend the rest of you life with in someplace as ...

It's that story! :D This, as is all your stuff, was a pleasure to read! The setting was really clear and well-formed, and I loved all the little humor in ...

Hey Shelby! I'm Lauren and I'll be reviewing for you today :3 Since you have multiple chapters here, I'm going to break it all down by each chapter individually, and ...

Hi there Antonio! I'm Lauren and I'll be reviewing for you today. :3 Since you have to poems, I'll separate my comments by poem: Pretty Brown Cats I quite liked ...

Ellie! :) Here as requested! Like I said, I'm so thrilled to see you going back to this story. I remember you working on it almost as long as I've ...

Hi TinyDancer! I really enjoyed this poem! You have some really good phrases and imagery going on here, which works well to support the ideas you're putting forth in the ...

Hi KatherineHope! I see you're new here to YWS, so welcome! I hope you love it here as much as we all do, and stick around! This poem is really ...

Hi creativityrules! I really enjoyed this poem! I like how you take the subject matter - someone cutting themselves - and present it in a way very unlike how cutting ...

Hi musingsmutterings! I see you're new here to YWS, so welcome! I hope you really enjoy it here, and stick around for a long time! You're obviously a very talented ...

Hi there WaitingForLife! :D This was...something! I'm still trying to wrap my head around it, to be honest. I like the sort of stream-of-consciousness element of two people star-gazing and ...

Hey there abullah! Lauren here for a review! :D Nitpicks! There were chains all around her, tight chains which nearly strangl ing ed her. They covered every inch of her ...

Hey BlueHeart! Lauren here for a review! This is a really interesting dynamic you have going here between Mika and Edward! I like it a lot, and it's different than ...