LakeOfCancer

O boy! Fluma, you did amazing! I'm not sure the last time you actually included romance into a poem of yours, but I absolutely love it!!!!!! And by the way, ...

I really like this because you use the armor as the protection against the depressed thoughts that run through everyone's minds. I also love how you try and convince the ...

I love this, it's so realistic, even if it's not in actual real life. My favorite line was "One always wins, The other dies." This was my favorite because it's ...

You know, I love horror stories and creepy stories, like this one. I never expect certain stories like this one to be so intriguing. While there may have been different ...

I really love this! I can seriously relate, cause I can't feel anything right now, more specifically my legs, but nevermind that, it doesn't really matter how I feel at ...

Oh my god E.E.! I know you hadn't tagged me to read it because I have never read these before, but I think I' gonna have to start all the ...

This shows how much people need help if they suffer from depression or suicidal thoughts. There aren't that many who are willing to reach out, like you and others. I ...

This is really good, while I may not understand the gist of it, I loved it nonetheless! I think you did a great job, you really spoke from the heart, ...

I'm so sorry this happened to you, no, it didn't happen to me, but I support the fact that you're willing to speak out about this rising issue. This poem ...

Love it!!!!! I don't know what you're doing Fluma but every time you publish a new write, and I read it, I feel like you keep getting better and better! ...

Love the poem! The one thing I didn't really enjoy was the fact that the letters at the start of a new line weren't capitalized. While it may have distracted ...

..........what the hell? Why aren't you an author? If you're not in a place where you can write a book, I can come over where you are and force you, ...

This was very realistic, and I loved it! You know, you never expect someone to type a poem about how they typed a poem, and you never expect someone to ...

Hey there! Lake here! You can say I'm a really good friend of yours in the future!;) Anyway, I love poems that people know in their hearts, so spiritual, so ...

I love this, it's so deep and spiritual, I feel like I can relate to this, I honestly think that when you wrote the three stanzas, they fit perfectly in ...