Laelle

Okay, bad news first. There were a lot of punctuation mistakes, but I think Savvy already covered that. Besides that, everything was cool! The description was perfecto, as so was ...

This was very, very sweet! I loved the ending. It was perfect in every way! I hate love stories, but make the occasional exception when it came to yours. :P ...

Really gushy! But I love it!!! The description was perfect, as so was the way you ordered every sentence. It flowed smoothly, and completely. Agreeing with the title right now, ...

Okay, bad news and good news. I'll be honest here. Everything was split, and it made it very hard to read. Maybe it's me, or there was a problem. I ...

AWW! So sweet! I loved it. The rhyming came naturally, and was unexpected. In this poem you told a story with style, and I love when people do that. The ...

This was very true. I could relate, and also feel you in this poem. A poem is all about the person's feelings being translated through it. You did just that, ...

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This was very true. I could relate, and also feel you in this poem. A poem is all about the person's feelings being translated through it. You did just that, ...

GO TEAM WIZARD! WOW! I love this! The description is perfect, along with punctuation. It gives a saddened vibe, but dark at the same time. I liked how in the ...

The rhyming came nicely, but also a little forced. When I was reading this I could feel your emotions, but at the same time not. This sounds really confusing...um, let ...

I love it. It was very free, and descriptive. Sad, but happy. You had a great deal of feelings in this poem. I like simple poems, but with a lot ...

That was really confusing...but somehow made sense. I liked the way you phrased some of it, but I think a little more description will do good. It was really short ...

It was good. I never experienced love, but this sounded beautiful. It was very sad though. I couldn't tear my eyes from the computer 'till I was finished. It was ...

I love it! The way you described this relationship almost killed me. Not literally, mentally. You did a very good job! Also, I felt like I knew your personality by ...

At first I was dying for laughter, but then it became so sweet! I loved it so much. You did a good job explaining everything. One thing I have to ...

I love it! I totally understood what you were feeling in this poem. I'm also christian, and this describes me so well. You really outdid yourself! I would love to ...