LadySpark

Hi PinK! “Hi, M om,” I said , and was taken aback by the white teeth that exposed themselves as her smile broadened. You don't need these extra words. spattered, ...

Hi, Pix. Here to review. May your lips land on mine as we sit in the theater, Hit Enter not yet ready? Hit Enter That ' s fine. My ear ...

Hi Pix! I've decided to review some stuff of yours today, cause, I'm bored and I need some points! What we are going to review in this review: 1)When to ...

Hi Pix! Here to review :D you met a dude that said he liked me by the door's ... This word doesn't make sense door's means it's before a possession. ...

Matthew is a 35 year old father sitting next to his daughter in a hospital. You could SAY this somewhere in the text. NEVER EVER EVER write it like this. ...

Hello Oneeyed! I fear spoken words, Because after you've released them You can never take them back. I fear writing down the thoughts in my head, Because you will judge ...

No, I won’t believe you , No, you don’t interest me. My heart no longer beats for you , My mind is never going to be stuck on you. And ...

Hi Raz without her icoon! Here to review! The honey melts into my ears, flowing down my throat in a sweet, serene vibration. It spills into my soul . B ...

hi Dream. I'm here to review this poem!!! :D Lips of rouge, a hellish crimson. Ebony lashes over senseless orbs.

hi! I'm drama and Imma review you today. She walks inside of me . Between shredded muscle , and fractured bone , She waits for eyes to open , Outside ...

hi!Here to review!!! You see only the sky You T aste only the air, You F eel only freedom, Okay, I see You you you you over and over again. ...

hi! I'm here to review! Voices echo in the silence , Tell of a race long ago . Standing tall among the trees , I personally don't like poems without ...

hi! Here to review! “No, you will never change!” Said so many people to me. Betrayed by God And wished by the Demon This line has a truthful beauty to ...

Hi! Here to review!!! A tight smile and warm eyes, No one knows the secrets. As much as I like this line, it didn't really pull me in. How could ...

hi! I'm here to review!!! :) They caught him, the one black as pitch, and held him against his will. He shudders amidst the fences, despondent and degraded, hanging his ...