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There might be mistakes here and there. But please tell me if it was interesting or not. 
Being honest here, but this wasn't particularly poetic. It was a bit too literal, and there was nothing about this poem that makes it unique or stand out from all the thousands (if not millions) of suicide poems out there. If anything, it was rather bland for a poem about suicide.
While normally I would give suggestions on how to improve the piece, it's a poem about suicide, and there's nothing interesting here to really work with. If you must write a poem about suicide, which I highly recommend against as it is a common theme that is almost never handled well, try and find a more unique perspective than "Everybody hates me, so I'm going to kill myself".
Also, slitting one's nerve, although incredibly painful, will not result in death. A major vein or artery is the thing to aim for.
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This line has a truthful beauty to it.
I really liked this. Maybe not the subject, but I love the poem itself.
~Drama