LadyOkra

Oh no! What did Garibaldi do now! :p I think this was quite an interesting read. I like how you take the simplest of situations as a setting for most ...

I like it! I like how you left a lot of information out of the story, keeping only the necessary details. That has somehow made the story successful in leaving ...

This is fantastic. With every question that the speaker asks, I get an insight into what the speaker went through. It makes me resent Felipe. Although the speaker is angry, ...

I really like the concept! Just in case somebody ends up reading the review upfront of the story: I think it's fantastic to discover your own kidnapping and also having ...

Let me be your private chauffeur. I will drive with great finesse. I'm fine, thank you. ;) Dear lord. Definitely not a person I'd like to be around. Well, to ...

A small suggestion: Then, as if on cue, thunderous applause reverberate s throughout the spirit realm My favourite line: as the once inexistent infinitesimal expands, swirls and coalesces into stars ...

Some errors I noticed: Can you get me out of here now?.” your insult involving infidelity and the morality of mothers reached the ears of our mother-worshiping alien crew members ...

Only nitpick: However when viewed from certain angles and shading and if the lighting is just right, why , he sometimes seems almost handsome. I loved it. I will take ...

I suggest some corrections that would work in your favor in my opinion. Please do not think me rude. We live in a world full of wonder, full of spirit ...

All the below stated suggestions are solely a personal preference. Some of it may appear fair to you and some of it may not. Wintress banged her fist down on ...

I noted the sentences that I thought sounded weird for you to have a look: They had thought they were doing right but the consequences of their rushed, desperate decision ...

Beautiful! Very well-written. I'd like to point out a few mistakes: Its all worthless if there is no substance behind the modelled façade Its should It's here. a knowledge of ...

Oh dear, I'm not sure what I feel. I think I'm very much convinced by the poet that this "he" must have committed a sin so abominable that he must ...

I think this an absolutely fantastic poem. I could feel the sadness and the regret that the prisoner felt right before he was put to death. A second chance had ...

What a beautiful poem! It touches my soul. with motherly caress upon my brow, telling me that soon, somehow, all these sorrows will be gone. Such great beauty encompassed succinctly ...