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Re: Lost in the world
Tigerlilly here to review! First off, welcome to YWS! If you need anything, just ask. Anyways, I really liked the theme and the structure of the poem, its really awesome. ...
May 9, 2015 -
Re: Teenage Diary Extracts 2
Tigerlilly here again! Can I please just say I can relate (to some extent... I'm quite younger than you) to this? I've been through a similar tragedy, yet different. (In ...
May 8, 2015 -
Re: The Sounds of Harmonies
Hey! Tigerlilly here for a review! I really like the idea of this poem... Its has great imagery and I love how you repeated the first two lines, just in ...
May 8, 2015 -
Re: Still Here
Tigerlilly here to review! First off, welcome to YWS! You've made a great start here, with these first couple of poems. I really like your writing, I love the flow ...
May 8, 2015 -
Re: The Soul of the Writer and Artist
Tigerlilly here to review! As an artist and a writer, I found it quite easy to connect to this! Each time you write something, or draw something, its almost as ...
May 8, 2015 -
Re: Teenage Diary Extracts
My goodness! You poor soul! I hope you are still ok after going through this... And you are really brave to have actually share this with everybody! I have once ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: 4/26/2014
Tigerlilly here to review! I'm going to start off by welcoming you to YWS! This piece is an incredible way to start off, and I must say, I'm truly baffled ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: Brother
Tigerlilly here to review! This piece really hit home for me. I love my brother to pieces, and I know being human that we get selfish and sometimes forget that ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: What Is Love?
Hello! Tigerlilly here to review! I just want to start out by saying I love this poem! You described perfectly every love story in history, and I feel like anyone ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: Mom
This makes me want to cry. I actually am no longer around my mother due to her resigning her parental rights (meaning shes legally not my mom anymore) and so ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: Trying To Write
This is very amusing to me. I tend to find myself in the exact same situation, so its easy to relate. I feel like it almost has a Dr. Suess ...
May 4, 2015 -
Re: Nightmare
Tigerlilly here to review! I find this piece very interesting! I think in entirety, its just a beautiful setup. It shows the hardships of getting over someone, and then, plot ...
May 4, 2015 -
Re: viridescence
This is something I've never come across before. I really like the originality of the theme and just how it flows together. Its so beautiful and the structure almost even ...
Apr 30, 2015 -
Re: Perfect day
Tigerlilly here for a review! This does in fact sound like an excellent way to spend the perfect day! Worry free, settle, with your friends and the one you love. ...
Apr 30, 2015 -
Re: He's a Nice Boy
Woah... The feels! I was completely stumped by the change of mood in this story. I was honestly expecting a cute love story out of this, so when he left ...
Apr 30, 2015
