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Hello! Tigerlilly here to review! Okay, so I like the concept you have put forth, and the repetition where you say, "I was wearing my favorite bracelet. The one you ...

Hello! Tigerlilly here to review! I really love the imagery you used here in this poem to describe the ocean! While I myself do not enjoy the ocean, I do ...

Hello! Tigerlilly here to revew on this wonderful day! This poem is really good! It has a lot of descriptive words that help paint the picture of whats happening. At ...

Hey Felistia! I really enjoyed this poem! It had an interesting rhyme scheme that worked well for it and the way it was written. I really enjoyed the imagery you ...

Hello! Tigerlilly here to review! As odd as it sounds, I feel like I can relate to this piece. Now you dont have to send me concerned PM's or anything, ...

Hello! Tigerlilly here to review! Okay so I would like to start off with the fact that this is a VERY interesting concept that would not normally show up. And ...

Hello! Tigerlilly here on this fabulous review day! I would like to start off by saying I found this poem very interesting. It speaks of a topic most people don't ...

Hello friend! Tigerlilly here to review on this fine review day! I really love this poem! I really enjoy the vocabulary you used in it, and the way it flows ...

Hello Artemis on this fantabulous review day! I really like the concept you display in this poem! It's very true, how love is very wonderful and princess-like, and yet, people ...

Hello! I happened to really enjoy the story told through your poem! It was very sweet and nice, especially considering you had my favorite animals. However, some of the rhyming ...

Tigerlilly here to review on this wonderful review day! :D Okay, first off, I wanted to say I really enjoyed the way you structured your poem. The stanzas are spaced ...

Hey! Tigerlilly here for a quick review on this fabulous poem! Okay, let me just say that this poem made me laugh out loud. It was random, weird, and beautiful ...

Wow. I really love this poem. I have issues with my mother, so I can definitely relate to this. I can feel the narrators pain and the word choice was ...

Hello! Before I get started, welcome to YWS! I really like your poem. I can definitely feel the narrators pain through this and think you did an excellent job getting ...

Pure beauty. I love how you describe the different areas of love, the way it can be a scary thing as well as a beautiful thing. I personally am in ...