KittyMew

You got the form right. The poem also has a meaning about butts. LOL But you can try to add more stanzas. A simple haiku like this might question the ...

The poem is really cute :) It's good that you posted your awesome work for the first time in this site :D Welcome! Welcome! Welcome. Now, I have been reading ...

Somehow, this poem fits to my Sadistically Sweet poem~ haha. Although the persona accepts it. So, going in the poem. The poem is actually good :) So straightforward but it ...

The poem is actually nice and sad. I sense some depression from this poem. It's like the persona is about die or something. The concept, the story, is actually good. ...

I can sense psychological feeling in this poem. I can pretty much relate to it because I went through that kind of stage. it was difficult, at start. But I ...

The poem is actually nice :) I basically like the concept and the idea into the poem. It has that cool factor, when I read the poem. It would be ...

The poem is actually good. I really like it :) The feeling is so calm and the flow is so smooth. Although, I only have a little bit of suggestion. ...

Hello :3 thanks for the review for Sadistically Sweet. Now, I am here to review yours as well. First, I actually like the poem. It's really good. Although there are ...

I love this poem so much. I like how you use the words "hither", "whither"...for sure you use these metaphorical words so it won't make the meaning too obvious. I ...

Awww~ I find this poem so chill and so heartwarming. I can feel that "old lady/man" kind of feel—it's like she/he is remembering the time when he/she was young. And ...

The poem is actually nice. I like how you say about the wind. The way how you describe how it feels is really good. Although you need to check out ...

WOOOOOOOOW!!! I LOVE THIS POEM! IT'S SO CLEAN AND FRESH TO MY EAR!! It's so calm. When I read it, I felt so enlightened. I felt like I was in ...

Nice! Super super nice! I love the poem so much. Although you just need to trim it a little because there are some lines that are long. You can shorten ...

I can relate to this poem. There is anxiety and depression written in this poem. I have those—until now. It is never easy to cure them. If you think that ...

Woah~ Do I sense some mature or sexual scenes here? Lol. It's really good and I love the flow of your poem. My imagination can be crazy sometimes, but I ...