Kingofnate

This is great. The form allows for little room for critique, what with it being so ironic. It felt modern, and stupid, like on of those shitty paintings (hear me ...

1. Right off the bat, switch "anyone" out with "anybody". The extra syllable breaks the flow. I like the repetition of "like a heart" and "like death". I'm not sure ...

I am hooked. you better be letting me know when you write the next chapter. So many questions! I'm sure these are meant to unanswered, but i'll bring them to ...

I think it's fair to say that this poem is rather unique, right? Brownie points for you, miss. (I assume you're a "miss") It's hard to tell whether this poem ...

Hola pallio overall this is pretty great. Relatable on a very deep level, a place that a lot of people dont like to venture. I really like the line "A ...

Hola, Neverneverlandgirl, I've got to say, i really like this poem. It honestly feels like something you might hear in an adele song. Even for a poem, it's poetic, and ...

THIS IS GOOD. I reallllly like this, its very poetic and beautiful. I can feel the emotion of the mother towards her son, and i could see alot of things ...

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Not a fan of introductions, so let me just get right in. I liked the introduction of her boyfriend. Something about the way you described that scene, i got the ...

Ah. Not really sure what you're getting at here. I would start with lengthening the story. It's a quick read. Too quick. Next, Try to add a little structure. There's ...

Short review, here. I totally dig this, because I am a heavy sleeper and I've got a really comfortable bed, So when you use the word "cradled" I totally feel ...

(I hate intros) I don't think you should've told us readers that this poem was based off of a photograph. Not in the beginning, at least. I liked being able ...

Hopefully this review is a bit more... Polite :D I of course, loved it. It is an excellent way to inspire people to donate more to charities and the homeless. ...

"Lucy yelled from the drivers seat of grandma's hatchback station wagon. It was already June, and Lucy was beyond ready to leave her bodunk town of Sarelton Alabama and travel ...

Well. First of all, that was incredibly depressing, which is what you are going for. I have personally wondered why people cut themselves, even if their life does suck. My ...