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Re: Ten Little Soldiers, Summarized in a Poem
Hello ComicalCrafty! I'm Avalon and I'll be doing you a review. There are many things I like about this poem that truly made it happen, and I can't come up ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Here Be Dragons
Tgirly old buddy! It's Dante or whatever you remember me by! First off this is a really interesting piece but in full honesty I feel it's a little confusing in ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Artemis's Finest - Chapter one
I'm Avalon and this is your long overdo review. First off is my negative criticism for this piece. my biggest problem is that this feels more like a short story ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Silver Soul: Chapter One
I'm Avalon and I'll be your Reviewer for the day. I'm blowing straight over and ignoring anything grammar related, because it seems to be the only thing people hit. Because ...
Apr 14, 2014 -
Re: Stereotypical Teenager
This is very, how to say? Dead on, I really like it. The rhyme scheme here is very good, definitly makes the poem more interesting. All tho I do often ...
Nov 6, 2012 -
Re: Musica: The Singer and the Dancer
This is very good, the rhyme scheme was better than what you told you were bad at, obviously your being humble about it. Now I think you could break this ...
Sep 17, 2012 -
Re: Conquering Fear
LoyalHeart here with a review! First off, very dramatic I like it a lot as it shows a person or whoever conquering fear itself. Maybe closterphobia, tho you never state ...
Jun 29, 2012 -
Re: How to Break a Bridge
Hey there is your guy LoyalHeart here with a review for you Thenody. First off I have to say this a really great, rather uniqueness to it in my opinion ...
Jun 28, 2012 -
Re: False Reflection
Yo Rocky its your buddy LoyalHeart here for a review! First off I got to say in the words of my english teacher, "THIS KNOCKED MY SOCKS OFF AND MADE ...
Jun 10, 2012 -
Re: Yours To Hold
Well, well, well, I got to say this is good, really good the rhyme scheme was decent at most. And to me it really sounds like a love song from ...
Jun 5, 2012 -
Re: Sapphires and Emeralds: Prologue
Hey Upandout I'm here to go a quick over review hope you like it! First off I got to say is, I like it, it gives a myserious feel to ...
May 27, 2012 -
Re: The 3 Levels of the Gifted
Sorry my comment was ment to be a review. I had to admit this is pretty good, but as barefootrunner said there was a lot of information dumping during the ...
May 26, 2012 -
Re: the quest of everret the prologue [:
Alright, I'm MasterLHeart and I'll be your reviewer on today. And I'll say this has protentail but I didn't like it all to greatly. Reasons being this was really short ...
Feb 3, 2012 -
Re: Howling Wolf ~Part 1.
Hello this is the MasterLHeart here with your review and Well, I went though this in a minute flat. And for the most part I didn't like it. It was ...
Jan 25, 2012 -
Re: Western Story
This was rather amusing to read for me, simply because I enjoy reading about the wild west. and in my opinion this is very nice piece of work here. I ...
Dec 19, 2011