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Killyouwithwords

  • Poetry » General, General Re: in which you ______.

    I'm not sure which song you're talking about, but I'm guessing it's Car Radio by Twenty-One Pilots? Either way, this is a pretty poem, simple but effective. I like the ...

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Other » Narrative, General Re: Lonely(English Task)

    This is wonderful writing for your age. Did you go back and edit it after or is this exactly how you wrote it in your English class? Everything's clear and ...

    Oct 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Recollection

    Beautiful but sad. I know you said this was just a casual poem, so this review is going to be short. Overall it was a delightful, refreshing poem (perfect for ...

    Oct 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: White Secrets Part 2

    Eek! Thanks for the link. This was awesome, especially the very last sentence. I can't imagine being brave enough to even look them straight in the eye let alone try ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: White Secrets Part 1

    I have to admit I love your story so much that I won't go over any spelling errors or anything like that. I just want to say that I LOVE ...

    Mar 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Rantings of a Love-Struck Fool Vol.1

    Hi :) I loved your poem, it was incredibly meaningful! There were so many parts that I especially liked! “Love's a lie disguised in a pretty bow. The pain it ...

    Oct 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Whats Inside Your Head

    Hey!! Killyouwithwords here to review your poem!! It was very skillfully written, and very beautiful! Full of depth and emotion, it could easily be very relatable to your readers. You ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My dream

    Good poem, I liked it. Very many misspelled words though, and not a lot of rhythm or detail. This needs some serious editing. You should really go back and look ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Florida

    Wow, beautiful imagery and fluid writing; this poem was fantastic! You did a great job of showing the dark side of an amazing place. I really like your style of ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Black Hole She Is

    Awesome poem! The flow was great, and the wording was better :) I really liked your description and you painted the scenes very well, but maybe use some more imagery, ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Curtains of Scarlet Wind

    I could tell you that I like this poem...but that would be an understatement :) It was excellent, I really loved it!! You used amazing imagery, and painstaking metaphors that ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Maddening Tales of Lucifer Wilde: Quite an Unfortunate Name Part 1

    Hi I'm Killyouwithwords here to review your poem!! I don't know what I can say after that amazing review the TheGoonerGirl (suddenly so glad she's on my team) gave. I ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ruthless Hurricanes and Gentle Showers

    Hi, this is Killyouwithwords here to review your poem! First off, I want to start by saying how much I loved it. Rain can be many things, good or bad, ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: *Untitled*

    Wow, this is incredible, and I didn't even mind the formatting because the poem itself was so good!! This is bound to be a very short review because of how ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: My Crown

    Hi, I'm Killyouwithwords here to review your poem! It was an interesting topic, very original. I liked your imagery, and the vocabulary you used. Great Job!! It was riveting and ...

    Jul 28, 2013


I wondered why we put villains in our stories when we have plenty of them in real life; then I realized that maybe we wanted stories where the good guy wins.
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