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Re: Have You Ever Lost Someone
This is absolutely beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this. It's so hard to review because it's just so honest and well-written and I don't think I can say ...
Mar 8, 2018 -
Re: Free
Hi there! Here to leave a review :) First of all, I love this poem. LOVE IT! This is pure creativity, imagination and some damn good storytelling that I'm rather ...
Nov 6, 2017 -
Re: The Shadow
Hi there! Here to leave a review :) Grammar 1) "Seemed;" - I would remove the semi-colon here, as it doesn't seem to fit 2) "Cause" - You need an ...
Nov 3, 2017 -
Re: The Worry Child
Hi there! Here to leave a quick review! :) Firstly, I like your poem. It has a good plot, which still has room for development when you go back over ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: water fire stars [draft 2 of bowing standing flying]
Hi there! Here to give a review :) Firstly, I really like the format of the poem. It really helps to emphasise the emotions of the narrator, which will help ...
Oct 10, 2017 -
Re: When Teapots Scream
Hi there! Here to leave a review :) Overall, I really really like this poem. I think it's very honest and truthful and this is a very clever way of ...
Oct 2, 2017 -
Re: •-• • -••• • -•-• -•-• •- (Rebecca)
Hi there! Here to leave a review :) Firstly, I really like how you've structured your poem. The very first line, "my life feels erratic" perfectly mirrors the erratic and ...
Sep 30, 2017 -
Re: She Said
Hi there! Here to leave a review :) I really like the rhyme & rhythm of the poem. It makes it easier and enjoyable to read. It's very simplistic, but ...
Sep 24, 2017 -
Re: Just a Star
Hi there! Here to leave a review :) I'll start by saying I absolutely love how you've structured this. It's original, it's quirky, and it completely fits your poem. It's ...
Sep 12, 2017 -
Re: Reflections on the Universe and You
Hi there! Here to leave a review :) I really like the first line. It's a strong opener, and I particularly like how you've used italics to highlight a different ...
Sep 10, 2017 -
Re: Silent Letters
Hi there! Here to leave a review :) I love this poem and would love for it to be longer. There are so many words with silent letters, therefore you've ...
Sep 10, 2017 -
Re: Miserables Atromitos (Sonnet)
Hiya! Here to leave a review :) Grammar 1) "blackwhispern" - I think this is meant to be "black whispers" or something like that 2) "bloomy sky" - this should ...
Aug 26, 2017 -
Re: you only leave on the night of the new moon
Hi there! Here to leave a review :) Grammar 1) "and take a momentary glance to the end of the road" - "to" should be replaced with "at" I'd suggest ...
Aug 26, 2017 -
Re: A Year In The Making
Hi there! Here to leave a review! Form & Structure I like how you've structured the stanzas to create a pattern of 1, 3, 4, 3, 4, 3, 1. It ...
Aug 24, 2017 -
Re: No choice.
Hi there! Grammar 1) "Those lies, were gone" - there shouldn't be a comma after "lies" 2) "and it lead way to rapids." - either "lead" should be "leads" or ...
Aug 23, 2017