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Have You Ever Lost Someone

by AlexNoelle


This is not a fictional story. It’s not a poem, or an English assignment or anything else I usually post on here. It’s more like a rant than anything else. I didn’t write this for anyone to read, or review. I’m writing this for me. You really don’t have to read what’s here, I’ll probably bore you to death.

Firstly, I am okay. Usually when people write serious stuff they get flooded with love and questions asking if they’re alright. So I’ll tell you now, I’m fine. I just have a lot on my mind, and honestly, writing it out and maybe hearing some other people’s feeling will just help me get a little more clarity. I don't normally share this kind of thing, but maybe it will help.

-(if you don’t want to stick around, just read the last sentence) I'll try and make it entertaining.

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These are some things that have happened to me in my past. I don’t like thinking about the past at all. I leave those things behind me and move forward as quickly as possible, so when it comes time for me to reflect, it’s kind of difficult, because It’s something I’m not used to doing. The things that are on my mind right now boil down to one topic. Loss. more specifically, losing people.

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I have some questions for you.

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Have you ever lost someone?

How did you deal with it?

Were you hurt?

…or just confused?

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I grew up in the country, I live in the same house I’ve always lived in. I haven’t had an easy life, but I won’t complain. I know lots of people have it worse, so I just try my best to be the best person I can be, and make life a little easier on the people around me. Of course I’m not perfect. And I’d never pretend to be…

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When I was about 5 years old, I made my first friend, I will call him James. My sister would always play with James’ two sisters, while James and I would do the things that most young boys or tomboys such as myself would stereotypically do. Climbing trees and riding bikes and throwing rocks at each other and running through the field behind his house with nerf guns and such. Our moms would talk late into the night, and while my sister was with his sisters, probably braiding hair and talking about stereotypically “girly things.” James and I would sit on the porch steps and look at his rock collection and talking about cars until it was time to go. But the way my family and his family were raised, it was wrong for a girl and a guy to be best friends. So I had to pretend that I was best friends with his sister, and in public I had to spend more time with her. Which was fine and all four of us became friends. Eventually we started hanging out with all his many siblings until there was a group of 9 of us all hanging out together until I was 10 years old and things started to change.

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I lost someone (for the first time since my grandfather passed) when I was 9. I had a great family, my Dad was a pastor, my parents had a happy marriage, I had two much older sibling that took care of and played with me and my sister a lot. We had the picture perfect family. But, when I was nine, I was playing with my dad’s phone, when a text came in from someone. I tried to click off it, but instead it took me into his texts, where to my horror, I discovered he was cheating on my mom with another woman. I didn’t know how to react, so out of fear, I stayed silent. A few months later everything fell apart on it’s own and my Dad abandoned us. My mom had to go get a job, and a lot of people didn’t like us anymore because of what my dad had done.

James’ family still supported us, but it became awkward.

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I remember I was about ten years old, and James was a bit older than me and he was going through puberty along with his brothers, they were growing up without me, and the guy I’d been friends with since I was 5 years old was becoming a stranger to me. It became awkward every time we talked… and I hated it. Then about two years later everything began to look up! finally!

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I was beginning to heal from the disaster that had wrecked our home life I started to realize that I could survive without my dad and even be stronger because of what had happened, and I finally had a friend again, All of us were rediscovering who we were as we all became teenagers, and thankfully we started doing that together. James was once again my closest friend and we started hanging out in a different way as our moms became more comfortable with us hanging out together as one girl and one boy because we’d known each other for so long. But I was an absolute idiot…

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When my dad first left, my sister and I were very different, and even had different opinions on what had happened. She hated my dad and never wanted to see him again, and decided that she hated me too because I still loved him. That caused us to start fighting ALL. THE. TIME. I feared our relationship would never get better, but as we grew older and more mature, we started talking again. Now we talk about everything, and I don’t know what I would do without her. When we started talking though, my older sister, being a 14 year old girl, would often talk about boys. I would join in the conversation, but I never talked quite like she did and I was very confused as to what was different. We once had a conversation where she was describing what it was like for her to have a crush when I came to the realization and told her that “I don’t think I’ve ever had a crush, I’ve said before I’ve had one, but I thought a crush was what you felt when you like someone and think they’re attractive. Not actually being ATTRACTED to them.”

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She was shocked. we didn’t talk about it for a while, but I was doing one research in my alone time, which even once included the google search “What is love” I was searching my heart and the internet for an answer as to why I was different than all the other girls and boys I knew. I even once went to James’ brother to ask what a crush was. HE tried to explain but couldn’t. Eventually I came to a conclusion, but hadn’t yet told anyone.

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One day my sister was talking about a crush when I said, “I still don’t understand.” and she replied with… “I think you might be asexual.” to which I replied. “I am.”

we talked for a while longer about it and it went well, she was very understanding and helped me do a little more research as I was still a bit confused. So we came to the conclusion that I am Asexual and Aromantic, I always said I never planned on getting married, and I never talked about wanting a boyfriend or girlfriend. Basically, I can look at a person and say, “Ooooh I’d like to stare at them for a while because I find them aesthetically pleasing. but I don’t want anything from them physically, sexually, or romantically.” The limit of my attraction to a person is wanting to become friends with them and look at their faces. But I don’t get romantically or physically attached.

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So anyway, I am terrible when it comes to being tuned in to my emotions. Sometimes I will say hurtful things and my sister will correct me and the conversation usually goes something like this.

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Her: “alright Sherlock, maybe not the best thing to say in that situation.”

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Me: “Why not?”

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Her: “You can’t just say that!”

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Me: “WHY NOT?”

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Her: “Because that’s insulting to his/her intelligence and so now they feel bad.”

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Me: “But it’s true, if people can’t handle the truth and listen to a logical explanation then what’s the point?

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her: “*SIGH* I’ll go talk to him/her.”

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She saves all my relationships. I really don’t notice if someone is making a pass at me or they mean something other than what they say. I don’t do well with figuring out when someone is being sarcastic or hinting at something, I just take them literally.

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So you know how I said a while back I was an idiot? this is what I was talking about.

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James and I became very close, to the point where we would spend a lot of time together, he’d say a lot of flirty and sweet things to me, and we’d hold hands under the table, and guess what I thought… “We were best friends.” I know… Idiot. I totally didn’t get the fact that he wanted more than a friendship even when he’d come right out and say the most obvious things. The problem was, I’d flirt back, thinking it was some sort of game people normally played, until my sister informed me…. that was not the case, he had fallen completely in love with me and I had been leading him on.

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We went on like this for a good two years before the third year became one of the most painful things I’ve ever gone through. I came out as asexual in his families car on our way home one night, some of them didn’t understand or thought it was funny, all in all no one really cared or thought about it much. But that’s when James knew I didn’t love him in the same way. The next year we started growing apart as I began realizing that it hurt him to spend time with me, and he eventually got a girlfriend. He didn’t need a girl as his best friend, he wanted a significant other, so once he got one. He didn’t need me anymore at all. I lost him forever.

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even when they first started dating, he’d try to get away from her to spend time with me, just to see if I would give. But I never did. And thus ended the two happiest years of my life, and thus began one of the toughest ones I’ve ever had to endure. He would just look at me, with the most heart breaking expression I’d ever seen on him, from across the room and then slowly turn his attention to his new girlfriend, who (turns out) he didn’t really love. Guess what… they’re getting married.

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As much as I DIDN’T have a romantic or physical attraction to him, I loved him. I loved him so much…

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During those times, my Dad bought and sent me an iPod, and I discovered the wonderful world of the internet, where I made a couple of friends. One of the best friends I ever made one there was a guy named Morgen, he was a very calm and collected guy who was a few years older than me. He gave the best advice ever! He helped me in times when I felt abandoned or insecure in any way. He was very sweet and intelligent and even helped me with some of my homework assignments. but guess what…

He died. The one person who was always there during that time, and could always make me feel better, and DIDN’T stab me in the back… died. the worst part was, my family wouldn’t let me talk to anyone over the internet no matter how careful I was because they thought something terrible would happen, even though I used fake names and ages and was very careful. So my internet friends were a secret. So when Morgen died, I had to go through the loss completely alone, I couldn’t even tell my mother someone I loved had died.

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The other friend I made on the internet was a girl named Alia, guess what… she committed suicide because of her abusive foster parents. I lost her too and I couldn’t tell anyone. I was very confused and just tried not to think about it. I had lost James, his two sisters, Alia, and Morgen in the span of three years, in the time I was SUPPOSED to be healing from losing my dad. I tried to overcome trust issues and my fears of abandonment, but it seemed like overtime it started to get better I’d lose someone else. I went through a bout of depression, which I didn’t tell my mother about until this year, because I was afraid. My sister finally knows about most of this and had been a great help. But the main reason I’m still here is because of my faith. God NEVER abandoned me. through all of this there was never a day where I felt complete hopelessness. I always had at least a little something to hang on to through my tough times. He is why I am still here. I have a much better relationship with my family now, I started having visitation with my dad. Though sometimes things seem to go back downhill, I get stressed, my mom and I hardly get along, I am overcoming a few other issues that I had as well, and other things in my private life, and these are NOT the only things that happened to me, but I’m okay. I really am. Life is not perfect, and in fact, right now some would say I have it rough. My life isn’t easy. But I know I can make it through.

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I know this was long and weird, these were just some things I needed to think about, and for me writing them down is the best way to do that. These things are on my mind right now because my Dad might have to move much further away from me, and I may actually never see him again, and it brought up a lot of memories of what it’s like to lose someone. Something that’s happened to me a lot, but I still don’t know how to deal with it… advice? What do you do?

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If anyone is feeling overwhelmed about anything, I’m opening up the review section for anything you want to talk about, just get whatever is frustrating you, scaring you, hurting you, etc. off your chest. 


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Sun Mar 11, 2018 3:38 pm
wordwing says...



Well, I don't think I've had experiences like that, sorry you had to go through that, but I happen to be asexual too and the sentence where you say that you find people's faces aestethically pleaseing hits home lol, I sometimes stare at people's faces... Shhhh, don't tell anyone. Also, I'm kinda curious about what you said about online friends, how do you even meet them (yeah I also know about safety and stuff and tbh I'm veeery careful about it) like, is there a website for meeting friends that isn't secretly a "dating" site?
Also, just wondering, how did you know they died if they were online friends?




AlexNoelle says...


I'm glad there's someone else who gets the... faces thing XD XD

I wish there was a website we could trust to be safe and find friends on! I met all my online friends simlilarly to how we're talking now. I had an online gaming app where I met Morgen and there was a private chat section where we would talk and then slowly (and cautiously) get to know each other. I met another friend back in the days when I had Wattpad! XD we collaborated on some writing projects and it went from there, we actually met on accident in an art supply store one time! I reckognized her right away and we hugged each other and maybe cried a little... maybe. ;P and she introduced me to her friend. So I have had about five pretty good online friends that I've been speaking to for about four years now. I guess I would just recommend getting to know people that you share interests with wether it be on tumblr or here or a chat in a game or whatever else, and not being afriad to start conversations and pursue a friendship, while exersizing caution of course!!

and I found out Morgen died because my other online friend knew him irl, and if she hadn't told me his girlfriend would've.



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Oh, I see. Thanks.



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This is absolutely beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this. It's so hard to review because it's just so honest and well-written and I don't think I can say anything bad about this at all. Well done, you did a great job with the 'rant' hehe and I'm really touched by everything you had to say!

Thanks again, it was a well-worthy read :)

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thank you :)



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I read all of this.
This really touched my heart, because I know what it is like to lose someone.
I had a really close friend of mine. She was a nurse for the Christian Camp that I went to, and everyone loved her. She had been going to that camp for about 20 years, so, everyone who went there knew her.
Well, I met her two years ago, during the family camp. Well, that’s when I started to actually talk to her, because before I didn’t.
Well, the only reasons why I talked to her and became her friend is because A) She was about 50-something years old, and I love people who are, well, old? Because they are the ones that end up being the must understanding, and wiser than teens (no offense). B) I was in her class, for the junior high kids. C) She has Jesus shinig through her, and it attracted me.
Well, she had a massive impact on my walk. She helped me learn so much, and encouraged me. She gave me advice, helped me, and accepted me for me.
The reason why I mentioned her accepting me for me, is because not many people want the real me.... not even my family. My siblings especially. They try to force me to give up writing, but I can’t do that.
Well, my friend loved me for who I was. And that just made me love her more.
Last year, at Family Camp, I was with her again. I was hyped up about that, because she was my favorite teacher ever. I mean that.
About half way into the week, I learned that she had cancer.
She died last month.
Yes, I was hurt. I am hurting still.
If you didn’t know this about me, then If you saw my positivity, you would think there’s nothing wrong with me. Well, that’s not true. The only reason why I’m positive is because I am hurting underneath, and Jesus is helping me through this emotionally hard time.
I lost my grandma to cancer as well, when I was about five.
And I lost four goats in less than a year, and that hurt as well. Especially since I was the Caretaker for them.
And I lost a baby sibling. I don’t know if it was a she or he, but I do know is that s/he ever got to run, breath actual air, talk, sing, and play with me.
So, yes, I know the hurt. I’m here if you wanna talk about it some more, because, well, listening to other people’s stories about the hurt they went through helps me forget mine.
If you want, I’ll pray for you and your family.
*offers many hugs*
I did see some errors, but I decided to leave them be,because I think this would be a lot better the way you have it now.
I mean, seriously. Something like this deserves to have mistakes, because that’s what makes it more beautiful in the end.
That’s a rough life, compared to mine. I admire the fact, though, that you still loved your dad even after he left and your sister hated him. That’s amazing.
I was mad at him, to be honest, but guess what. I do t hate him. I can’t even hate, because I... I just can’t.
And losing someone who cared for you.... I can understand part of the pain.
That’s rough....
ok, I’ll go now. I was probably being very self-centered, but that was something that I had to share with someone who would understand. Thanks for reading this, and God bless you.
((Technically this should’ve been a comment instead of a review because it’s more of that instead of a review...
But here was a little review in it so..... I guess it’s ok?))




AlexNoelle says...


Hello,
firstly I want to say that I'm really glad I was able to touch your heart. I didn't know when writing this how it was going to turn out or if anyone would read it at all. So don't feel guilty about marking it as a review or it sounding as you said "Self-centered" because this is exactly what I wanted the comments/review section to be like. I wanted people to feel like they could just talk about what is on their minds and be able to open up about what's bothering them. So I was really happy to see someone willing to share some personal stories. I'm sorry for what you've been through, you already know I can relate. Just keep trusting in Jesus, I truly believe that's how both of us have made it this far.

Your offer of prayer was very kind and I'll accept it, but not for me. Something happened very suddenly.

This morning there was an accident up the road from us and a 15 year old girl was killed, the two other siblings were airlifted to the hospital. I don't know them very well, but we gave the little boy a rabbit once to take care of. The parents are going through a lot right now, and they are friends with a family that lost their daughter to cancer earlier this year. And that girl's birthday is Sunday. We had just had them over for breakfast this morning, then all this happened. It doesn't affect me as much. I don't know any of these people very well, but if you could pray for these families too, it would be great. I am able to ignore my own feelings of loss right now, because I can only think of how these other families must be grieving. The more people in prayer, the better.



DreamingofWriting says...


I%u2019ll definitely be praying for them.



AlexNoelle says...


Thank you, I really do appreciate it
<3



DreamingofWriting says...


No problem. I'll let my NaNo buddies know.



DreamingofWriting says...


All of NaNo is praying for you and the girl.



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I read it but I really don't know what to say except God will never abandon you! His love is perfect. Trust Him.




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Thank you <3



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LeutnantSchweinehund says...



I read it. All of it. Quite an interesting read, that's for sure.

There is no life without loss. I've lost people too. Grandmother to Alzheimer's, great-grandfather to pneumonia, cousin tried to kill himself, and now I've probably lost my mother to a long-lasting series of irreparable disputes. But such is life.

I read what you wrote about asexuality, and also noticed your age. You also mentioned that your lifelong friend is getting married, so I am left a bit confused. Assuming you are only 15 though, I'd lay off on the question of sexuality. There's time. Hell, when I was 15, I thought I'd never want anyone, that I'd be okay with me, myself and I, but soon after, even that absolute conviction changed. Same for my first and current girlfriend, who believed she'd never want anyone either. Point is, don't rush into any labels too soon. Wait for awhile. Feelings are weird.

You are right, however, saying that God abandons no one. The Lord has found me five months ago, and my faith has been strong ever since. There is no greater gift than to be loved by the Lord, and in my opinion, we must do what we can to honor Him and his will. Sounds rich from me, a horrible sinner. Broke every commandment except for "Thou shalt not kill."

That's the beauty of it all though, isn't it? Forgiveness and acceptance, despite our sinful nature? We lose, we win, we cry and laugh, but God is always by our side, and everything that happens is inevitable.

Lord be with you and peace be with you too. Keep your life positive, and more so your stock profits! Amen!




AlexNoelle says...


Thanks for the advice. James is 18 btw, if that clears up your confusion. Pretty young to be getting married but who am I to say anything. I usually don't use labels at all, and I agree with you there. My heart is open to God's calling in case my purpose IS to get married, but I'm pretty sure at this point, mostly considering the fact that my other older sister is 31 years old and she is also Asexual and came to that conclusion when she was 15, which I didn't know until this year. But you're right, I am still young so that's why I don't tell anyone IRL about that. only 10 people overall know. This was my first time posting something like that on the internet.
yeah, thanks for taking the time to read this, I'm glad it was at least interesting XD



LeutnantSchweinehund says...


Never know what life has in store for any of us... It's an unpredictable road to say the least!

Godspeed!



AlexNoelle says...


Amen
and thanks



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Crap how do you spell it?



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please do not tag me



AlexNoelle says...


okay I won't, sorry.


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I will read it!

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DeerInBacPac says...


Thanks!




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