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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dracula`s Heart

    Hello, mangesh. This poem seemed oddly interesting (in a good way.) I loved every part of the poem. You should write more, you are very good at this. Anyways, my ...

    Dec 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: How Can We Repay

    Hello, InfinityandBeyond. I really like your poem. I find it interesting because honestly, I am Christian so I think about these kinds of questions from time to time when I ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: 「The Cry That Cannot Be Heard」

    Hello, maryanne. This poem made my heart cry because I use to feel the same way. I absolutely know how this pain feels inside one's heart when it comes to ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: Anastasia Loves You

    Hello, KittyBee. This poem almost made me cry, and I rarely cry while reading. I was touched by the whole poem and I was somewhat saddened by it. The lines ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Misery - Ch.1

    Hello, Odysseus 310. I love this story so far. Even through it's just a letter, it introduced the characters so well. I honestly think you should continue your story. It'll ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Scales

    Hello, dragonfphoenix. I really like your poem. I was really into it by the time I read the first sentence. I love the wording in the poem mostly because I ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Spiritual Re: The Keys to Silence Are Black and White

    Hello, Silverlock. I honestly wish I can write like you can. It looks so composed and detailed that I couldn't stop reading for a second. I imagined the scenary of ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Weeping Willow

    Hello, xDarkHeart27x Honestly, this poem made me dance for real xDD It just sounded so catchy just now, but I think this poem is about something serious so I was ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Realistic Re: Worth It

    Hello, Carlito. I really love this song. It sounds like something with acoustic guitar just playing in the background. I can honestly see a guy or a girl sing this ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Death Won't Set You Free

    Hello, cupcakenx. Your writing is really good. I am very moved by this essay. Honestly, I used to be suicidal at one point in time... but now I changed my ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Untitled (need help with the title)

    Hello, bugslake. I really enjoy this because honestly, this is usually the kind of novel I read. This type of story is usually what today's society reads nowadays so I ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Other Re: Prologue

    Hey, cheymarie828, I like the prologue because of the suspense you left at the end of the prologue. I literally questioned myself for example "what happened to Cali?" etc.. etc.. ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Immortal Discord {Part 1}

    Hello, ocw2021. Good Comments: I love the story so far. When it comes to historical fiction, I become hooked on something I am interested in. I was very interested in ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Script » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Adventures of Felix Van Doren: Zombies!

    Hello, Nephthys. Good Comments: So far, the script is flowing very well. It is well-detailed (not simple and not too-detailed.) Also, when I first started reading this, I laughed at ...

    Dec 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: It's my Birthday !

    This is an amazing poem c: I love this one part in the poem can I can relate especially the closeness to your mother, cause I am close to my ...

    Dec 20, 2013


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