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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: New Found Freedom!

    Hullo! First off, I really liked the title and that you started off with a first person point-of-view character who was a bright, ambitious student who had never cheated before. ...

    Jul 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Iron Monster

    Hullo! The imagery and emotion of the narrator were great - I could almost place myself in his/her shoes. I can guess that this took place in London from the ...

    Jul 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: What Happened (Temporary Title)

    Hiya! Well I like how it's a short, quick-to-read poem. Almost lyrical with the repetition too. There's only a few things I want to say: as I read it I ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Ship of Doom

    Hullo! First off I really like the title - that and the description really drew me in. The setting and viewpoint interested me too, and there were only minor mistakes. ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Chapter One

    Hullo (again)! This really captured my interest - I like how you used the beginning event as bait to hook the reader in, and then explained some things about the ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Humor Re: Blooms of Disaster Chapter 2

    Hullo! Yes, I did read Chapter One before this, and now I'm here to review Chapter Two! First, the plot, setting and characters are pretty original and that's good. But ...

    Jun 3, 2013
  • Other » Other, General Re: Predictable Unpredictability

    Hullo! This is definitely an original piece of literature. It was almost humorous and a brainteaser in a way too. I really enjoyed this and I'd recommend this to anyone ...

    Jun 3, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Realistic Re: Teen Ethics and Morals

    Hullo! So I was drawn in by the title, of course. Not the most intriguing title, but it is eye-catching. I really liked the fact that this is from a ...

    Jun 3, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Did you hurt me or did I do it myself?

    Hullo! So the title really sparked my interest - good bait to catch a reader. The solid truth and how readers can relate to this throughout the essay makes this ...

    Jun 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: THE WIND OF CHANGE

    Hullo! So I thought this was very interesting: the title really hooked me in and I never lost interest as I read the poem. I loved the description and how ...

    Jun 2, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: my life

    Hullo! So this poem is simple but absolutely lovable! It's upbeat, fun, and easy for readers to relate to. The rhyming, little descriptions, and imagery really added to the summery ...

    May 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Grave Stone

    Hullo! This is my first review, so I'm not that great at reviewing yet, but I hope it helps! What I liked most was the consistent imagery - it really ...

    May 29, 2013


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