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Oh my gosh, creativityrules!! I absolutely loved this! When it was at the 'wedding part', I felt tears in my eyes. It was very heart felt. I think you have ...

Wow missbookworm! You really did a great job on this one. I would love to read on! So basically, starting with the chase, you caught my attention. That's a really ...

Hey! Nice job I think this was great, but I have to agree with Pix. You should try to capitalize more. I think you've got a good perspective. Good job ...

Hey, soccer55, I've got to admit, I was waiting for what's next! I mean, it left me sort of hanging there! hmmmm...... Here are the things I think you should ...

Wow, yubbies21, It seems like everyone thinks that "long is better than short" these days, but with this, I am now convinced that that's wrong. I read it once, twice, ...

Hey. Well, I have to agree with Rydia. It seems incomplete. I don't think it explains enough. Is it talking about the sky? It doesn't make it clear. I don't ...

BRAVO! *Cheers as you bow a million times* *CLAP CLAP*. Okay, this was great! I feel like this-- often. I like how every other line is a question that starts ...

Oh wow! The last part made me seriously laugh out loud! Great! I mean, hahaha, I loved it! At first, it looked a bit--- well boring (no offense) but then ...

Oh wow, Pandorax! This is so nice! (And in a way, I totally agree!) I just love the descriptions, and medaphores (How do you spell that?)! It's awesome! I think ...

Wow! You did a great job on this one! So, first of all, I think that starting with "The boy" on each sentence is cool. It makes for a very ...

Hey, Yatta! When I saw this for the first time, I was like-- "six verses aren't going to be very good. Good is loooooong". Now, I know I was WRONG. ...

Hi Cspr! I first want to comment, that I love reading poetry. It makes me-- happy. This one, makes me feel like I've been mean to my couch! :) Anyhow, ...

Hey! Great job! Let me explain something first, I'm mostly reviewing so I can write, but I've figured out that I love reviewing. I don't want to be harsh.... I ...

That's very nice, I mean, to my nose. I agree with ERZA though. If you could add put punctuation and capitols on, it would be even better. Also, I think ...

Wow, Murmurations, I'm surprised! I personally liked it a lot. I like this kind of style that rhymes a lot. It was entertaining, but I don't think the "forgot Janes' ...