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I like it. It is childlike, in a positive way. Brings me back to times when I began questioning life in my early teens. This is lovely. Very simple and innocent.
BRAVO! *Cheers as you bow a million times* *CLAP CLAP*.
Okay, this was great! I feel like this-- often. I like how every other line is a question that starts with "don't" and the other ones start with "How do you know". It makes for a very interesting one. I just love how-- it rhymes SO much! How in the world do you do that??
Anyhow, 10/10 for me!
Keep writing!
KRose
Wow. This is really amazing. It's really relatable and I can feel exactly what your talking about! I really like the way you kept the beginning of each stanza the same, it added to the flow of the poem. I honestly don't have anything bad to say about this! Great job and keep writing!!!!
Thanks! I am working on the fanfic.... slowly, but surely
It's getting there
~Trav
This is so thought provoking, it's really interesting. The rhyme kept it from becoming boring and added to the rythm. I really enjoyed this, keep writing.
Thanks! Again, it's much appreciated
This is a cool poem! The concept is interesting and the rhyme adds a good word flow. It raises some good, thought provoking questions and the last sentence ties it up nicely. You put enough stanzas to intriuge the reader but not so much that they're bored. Keep writing!
Thanks!
much appreciated