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Re: Bundle of Flowers ~ Chapter 6
Hey, here for a Review Day review! Because this is a chapter, and I haven't read the rest of the book, I'll just evaluate purely off of the aesthetic and ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: What Happened to the Dragons?
Hey, here for a Review Day review! Impressions: Nice little fable with a children's story feel to it. I'm sure my little cousins would love this, especially if it had ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Lacerate
Hey Kaos, here for a Review Day review! Impressions: Great poetry. This piece is very unique and is definitely original in every sense of the word. You've chosen an interesting ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: S T A R R Y D A Y S
Hey Dreamery, So glad I get to review this first! First Impressions: I know you were freaking out about this one, but I think it's great. True poetry. Perhaps not ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: How it felt to Meet You
Hey writervid, First Impressions: I thought this was pleasant and sweet, with some good highlights, and a few places left to improve and make it better. Standard poetry, I say. ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: november rain
Hey, spectator First Impressions: This is a great poem, written with a lot of emotion and a lot of imagery. (I'm not exactly sure what thoughts you're wanting me to ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: Stars and Galaxies
Hey, felistia First Impressions: I like this little piece. It's interesting, and though not overly original, it is unique. Positives: A streak of glittering violet, And a dab of cosmos ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: Dragons
Hey felistia, First Impressions: Okay, this is sick. Not just because I love dragons, but because it's just beast what you've done. Hold on, let me stare at it for ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: Prologue/ Chapter 1 (also on Wattpad)
Hey, AmyMedek First Impressions: Cool little fantasy piece. Positives: golden hair with a tint of passionate red flew behind her like a long trail of spider's silk as she chased ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: Pounding Hooves
Hey, felistia First Impressions: I like the flow and the feel of the poem. It really has this downward drag that pulls me to keep reading, and to read a ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: Broken pieces
Hey, winny Impressions: Simple review for a simple piece. I thought it was okay. Definitely a lost love poem. Of course, you have to remember that probably more than fifty ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: Olives and Doves
Hey Ejay1806, First Impressions: To be honest, my first impression was that this is more of just a personal little opinion, slapped together in the shape of a "poem." Then ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: Ghost Horse
Hey felistia, First Impressions: I agree with EverySecond below that the title, and perhaps the whole poem, isn't exactly the most original piece you have. Doesn't have to be, necessarily ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: Butterfly heart
Hey Kaos, First Impressions: Positives: I love this realistic, gone bad romance you've built here and thrown at us. It feels very edgy, but with the presence of an actual ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: From a Dream
Hey Joelsweet, First Impressions: Very interesting little thing you have here. To be honest, I'm not the right person to enjoy this, because I'm not what you would call a ...
Nov 25, 2016
