JohannaPomeray

This is exceptional. I'm marginally in love with you because of your poetry. Pleeaaase teach me how this whole writing thing works XD. That being said ( that wasn't very ...

This is Very Hemingway.( I just read 'The Old Man and the Sea' so fish=Hemingway in my head XD) The dry,sparse imagery is wonderful. The sort of mock lament, or ...

This is magnificent. I hope you know how marvelous it is. You have tapped into a very basic human yearning; the search to understand whatever higher power there is. I'm ...

This is a brilliant piece. Please hold on to it. The imagery is potent, the diction is spot-on, the narrative is golden. I would love to see this as a ...

Ohmygoodness this is a whirlwind tied to a stone. Ah that is some deep, dark content. First off I would like to apologize for whatever deranged and deprived facet of ...

This is heavy. You've got a poem here that is trying to communicate a communication breakdown. That alone is quite fantastic. But beyond that you have done a marvelous job ...

This is quite lovely :3. I really think the imagery of the first scorn being cast. That has a good feel when you say it and the image it conjures ...

This is interesting. There are a lot of things you have done here that are very stylistic and suggest a lot about what's going on inside the narrators head. Like ...

This is potent. There are some serious things going on here. This is a poem that isn't kidding. The first thing that really stood out to me was the drastic ...

Oh this is the bomb. You have a marvelous way of tracing out the extraordinary as if it were ordinary. Also your sense of language is magnificent. It applies to ...

This is perplexing. ( And that's my way of saying that it's fantastic ). This format is bae. Just amazing. It's like four parallel lines of though playing out at ...

This is really cool. Have you read e.e. cummings or any of the beat poets? You should, I think you would dig. Anyway, to Business! This is fantastic exploration of ...

This is short and sweet. Again, I like the honesty and forthcoming quality of the piece. Also, the lack of exposition does a good job of letting the reader put ...

This is great. I'm guessing if you are writing like this, that you have read Bukowski? if not, check him out, I think you guys have the same approach to ...

This is great. I like the title! It reminds me of Sufi poetry. You should check out Rumi and Hafiz, they have a lot of very romantic poetry. Translations by ...