Young Writers Society

Review time!:) Okay so I really liked the last 4 lines. They sum up the entire poem (my opinion). I thought the images in this poem were very clear for ...

I really loved the last line of this poem! Everything led up to the ending so perfectly. The words connected together really well and it was easy to connect to. ...

Hey! I personally enjoy writing poems (especially about this topic) so I will try to give you some useful edits! Okay, so the main issue I am having while I ...

Hmm this is intriguing...I'm going to try to help. Correct me if I'm wrong but, I notice that you have an AABA rhyme throughout the entire poem...and that the stanzas ...

Hey. This was a very clever poem and (being the nerd that I am) the title drew me to read it. I have a few comments though. Chemical love You’re ...

Hi there. I am a little rusty on my review skills, but I'll try to make this worthwhile. I read The Outsiders back when I was in 7th grade and ...

Hey! This is really good. I like the observation you made in writing this poem. But...there is one thing that I would try to fix. Punctuation adds a lot to ...

You have an interesting poem here. What was your inspiration? I'm going to try to give you a good review...but I apologize if it isn't good since I haven't reviewed ...

Hey! I thought you did a very good job of trying to paint the reader a picture of what you were trying to say, instead of telling them straight out. ...

Here to review! This was a very unique poem, I have never seen a poem written about this topic (until today). Just one thing... Flows with water, breathes with air, ...

Here to review for you! I liked your poem. While I could tell it was dripping with emotion, it didn't really allow me to feel your pain. When I read ...

Here for a review! Your poem was nice, especially for your first poem :] One thing I noticed though, was that you said the same thing over and over again ...

Lol this is great! I loved how you took such a cheery subject such as santa and made him into a creepy person. I didn't find anything wrong with it. ...

This was a really nice poem! It was very creative and the format was unique. I did not find any major edits, but I just had a few comments/suggestion :] ...

I will be your first reviewer :] I offer you my love, My soul, My very physique; All within your grasp, If you can win this game of hide-and-seek… -->Nice ...