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Re: I can't remember
Hi, Roxy! This was a very interesting piece. I don't recall reading many like it, so kudos for originality. It also turned out very cool! I love how it started ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: Celtic Stone Prayer
Hi, Mithrim! Fortunately, I don't have much to review since it all lined up pretty well. ;) I thought it was sweet. I tried really hard to follow the directions, ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: I've lost all my friends to Facebook
Hi, Frances! lol, I liked this. I found it funny. I was in the exact same position a couple years ago. When my friends and I all went to different ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: About You
Hi, Anna! I really liked this piece! I loved all the Shakespeare references, and I think there could potentially be more. I imagine you were inspired by this because you ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: A.D.D. is ruining me.
Hi again, New! What genre of songs do you write? I can't really place it in my mind -- at least, I can't match a sort of tune to it ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: The Name Is Chad
Hi, AJ! This was a pretty good song here. There were really good moments and some iffy moments, but overall, it was well-written! :) I am a person, I am ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: WIll Never Fall again.
Hey, New! This piece was well done. The rhyming was definitely good in the first stanza. I found the lack of structure a little odd, but I wonder if this ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: Maybe
Hi again, SparkleDoubt! So what is this? (Did I scare you?) You've been cranking out awesome songs lately. That's what this is! (Teehee, I loff you!) Seriously, I love this. ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: Disguise
Hi, SparkleDoubt! I remember reading this earlier, but I was too tired to get my thoughts straight in a review. So I came back today! And I liked it as ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: Like petals in the wind
Hey, Mikster! This is definitely a beautifully-done piece of work. You should certainly be proud of it! And you're totes right -- those third and fourth verses are really awesome. ...
Jun 2, 2012 -
Re: Voices: Welcome to the Games
Hi, Angel! This was an awesome piece. I enjoyed the story, and I hope I could read more some time. Maybe you plan to lengthen it? It would make a ...
May 30, 2012 -
Re: Someone else
Hi, Schwarz! This is a very sweet piece. I actually felt like the speaker was talking to me. Your narration was very good; the tone was beautiful. Before I delve ...
May 30, 2012 -
Re: Freak
Hi, Joker! Very intriguing piece. I wish I had read more to get a better idea of what was happening in this piece. It's interesting and cool at the same ...
May 29, 2012 -
Re: To my brave brother.
Hi, Gumball. :) This is a very moving and beautiful piece. I'm sorry to hear that this truly happened, but the way you ended in pessimism (meeting him in heaven) ...
May 29, 2012 -
Re: my high school VALEDICTORY speech
Hi, Lyra! Noticed this was your Valedictorian speech? That's really cool! I'd love to read this through and give you my opinions. It's such a huge honor to give a ...
May 29, 2012
