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  • Other » Review, Realistic Re: I can't remember

    Hi, Roxy! This was a very interesting piece. I don't recall reading many like it, so kudos for originality. It also turned out very cool! I love how it started ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Other » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Celtic Stone Prayer

    Hi, Mithrim! Fortunately, I don't have much to review since it all lined up pretty well. ;) I thought it was sweet. I tried really hard to follow the directions, ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Lyrics » Satire, Culture Re: I've lost all my friends to Facebook

    Hi, Frances! lol, I liked this. I found it funny. I was in the exact same position a couple years ago. When my friends and I all went to different ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Realistic Re: About You

    Hi, Anna! I really liked this piece! I loved all the Shakespeare references, and I think there could potentially be more. I imagine you were inspired by this because you ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: A.D.D. is ruining me.

    Hi again, New! What genre of songs do you write? I can't really place it in my mind -- at least, I can't match a sort of tune to it ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: The Name Is Chad

    Hi, AJ! This was a pretty good song here. There were really good moments and some iffy moments, but overall, it was well-written! :) I am a person, I am ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Lyrics » Narrative, Lyrical Re: WIll Never Fall again.

    Hey, New! This piece was well done. The rhyming was definitely good in the first stanza. I found the lack of structure a little odd, but I wonder if this ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Lyrics » Romantic, General Re: Maybe

    Hi again, SparkleDoubt! So what is this? (Did I scare you?) You've been cranking out awesome songs lately. That's what this is! (Teehee, I loff you!) Seriously, I love this. ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Narrative Re: Disguise

    Hi, SparkleDoubt! I remember reading this earlier, but I was too tired to get my thoughts straight in a review. So I came back today! And I liked it as ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Politics Re: Like petals in the wind

    Hey, Mikster! This is definitely a beautifully-done piece of work. You should certainly be proud of it! And you're totes right -- those third and fourth verses are really awesome. ...

    Jun 2, 2012
  • Other » Horror, Supernatural Re: Voices: Welcome to the Games

    Hi, Angel! This was an awesome piece. I enjoyed the story, and I hope I could read more some time. Maybe you plan to lengthen it? It would make a ...

    May 30, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: Someone else

    Hi, Schwarz! This is a very sweet piece. I actually felt like the speaker was talking to me. Your narration was very good; the tone was beautiful. Before I delve ...

    May 30, 2012
  • Other » Narrative, General Re: Freak

    Hi, Joker! Very intriguing piece. I wish I had read more to get a better idea of what was happening in this piece. It's interesting and cool at the same ...

    May 29, 2012
  • Other » Realistic, Realistic Re: To my brave brother.

    Hi, Gumball. :) This is a very moving and beautiful piece. I'm sorry to hear that this truly happened, but the way you ended in pessimism (meeting him in heaven) ...

    May 29, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: my high school VALEDICTORY speech

    Hi, Lyra! Noticed this was your Valedictorian speech? That's really cool! I'd love to read this through and give you my opinions. It's such a huge honor to give a ...

    May 29, 2012


Whenever you find you are on the side of the majority, it is time to pause and reflect.
— Mark Twain