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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 6.1

    HELLOOOO! This made me so happy to read omg. And I'm still giggling immaturely at his name Buttane every time I see it. And I think the dynamic between these ...

    Dec 19, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Upon A Hope-A Heroes Story

    Oooh, I really like the progression of a hero's growth through this piece. It starts out with such a strong image of a broken and hopeless man and ends with ...

    Dec 15, 2019
  • Script » Humor, Dramatic Re: You're Too Young

    I have nothing constructive to say because this was just so freaking adorable. I love your characters, I love the relationship between Mama and Kaila, and I love just how ...

    Dec 13, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Earth

    This was a bittersweet ode to Earth. It starts out so brutally honest and ends with an air of hope and reassurance while closing with a final callout to the ...

    Dec 12, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 6.2)

    Awwwwwwwwww this was so cute in so many waaaays. I really like the choice of using Rowan's POV here so we can get an outside perspective of everyone else and ...

    Dec 11, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 5.2

    OHHHHHHHHHHHH WHAT Is it temporary? Is it a temporary move?!? IS IT PART OF HIS SHTICK? Or maybe he played us all and is actually going to his mother instead?!? ...

    Dec 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: EndoB(i)A

    Hello! The title intrigued me, so I had to stop by and see what this was about. Sadly, I still don't know the mystery behind the title yet, but! I ...

    Dec 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: How You Know Your Friends

    Omg this was so lovely and fun. Totally a mood, let me tell you. You do such a great job depicting the BFF relationship that I just adore, honestly. I ...

    Dec 9, 2019
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Insane confession

    Oh, man, this was so cool. I really enjoyed this concept. It's so eerie, and the story really played on its spooky setting and atmosphere really well. The demon at ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: Cat and Boy

    I totally thought I reviewed this and was so confused why it didn't show up. I guess I left it in notepad on my work computer, whoops! This was absolutely ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: A vacant heart

    Good morning! I absolutely adore the fairy-tale feel of this story. It's simple, beautiful, heart-breaking, and carries a life lesson deep down inside. The concept is beautiful, and I very ...

    Dec 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 6.1)

    I just love your characters SO freaking much. I JUST LOVE THEM. I don't know how you manage to keep them all so individualized because there are so many but ...

    Dec 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 5.1

    PIRES IS SUCH A MASTER OF DISGUISE. I'm so happy and thankful for this segment because omg I was worried for Buck. And I like how this chapter starts out ...

    Dec 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Woman in My Bed

    Good morning! I love how personal this poem is, and it's so easy to understand what this poem is discussing. You lead the reader through the process of self-identification so ...

    Dec 2, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Finished

    Hello! I really loved how descriptive your story was. The narration did an incredible job leading us through this story, pointing out details that helped narrow down the scenario from ...

    Dec 1, 2019


Percy fell face-first into his pizza.
— Rick Riordan, The Mark of Athena