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Hello! This was a great poem, but like magpie said you did skip around a lot. I see where you are trying to take the poem, but maybe you could ...

Okay this was a great poem but the last part of the poem is a little off. "Another day She killed herself That beautiful, wonderful angel She's so inspirational" In ...

This was really depressing and enjoyable. I can relate to it because I use to cut But I know a lot of people who are currently cutting and suicidal This ...

Hello Punkpanda Your poem was very well written But I felt that you could have added more Like after I read it I want more "When you lay to bed ...

This poem is totally awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sometimes I really hate waking up. You kept me interested the ENTIRE time Which is great And this is something that I would tell my ...

This a good poem but in my opinion I think you could add more or fix your ending. Other than that this was very emotional As I was reading I ...

Wow you really had me near tears. This is an amazing poem. I could really relate because I use to self-harm and the scars I still have from it aren't ...

This is a very well written poem. Maybe you could go and add more. I'm sure your readers will be able to relate to your poem. Other than that it ...

Wow this is good Sadly, I had a guy who did me this way Anyway back to the poem Its a beautiful but painful poem Everything connects together as far ...

Okay so I assume this poem has something to do with romance. Its not a bad poem at all But it could be better The poem is really short And ...

Like the person said below you just need a few semi-colons But other than that this is good Sorta reminding Christians to thank God. It was well written It made ...

I want be long Im gonna make some quick reviews So you repeat alone a lot of times Thats too many We get it, the narrator is Alone And u ...

I'm not sure what its suppose to mean But I took it as someone cutting themselves Like they've gone through so much that there sorta tired I'm not sure Either ...

I enjoyed the poem as a whole But I did feel like you could have added more "I have flown through the air, I have soared: To the pool far ...

Wow!!!!! This poem is amazing I can tell that there was thought put into this poem. Some might find it rude but your poem touched me Mainly because I go ...