Together By Myself

I want be long
Im gonna make some quick reviews
So you repeat alone a lot of times
Thats too many
We get it, the narrator is Alone
And u could repeat just do it in a different way
Maybe you could go in and more to it
Alone takes up 75 percent of the poem
But other than that this was really good
Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hello there, just a quick review on your poem
It really makes me a bit unnerved when reading it. Honestly, the idea that you gave is quite brilliant, but I believe it should attract more attention to the reader. Not only provide an element of repetition that seems quite a lot, you can actually deliver it in a more effective way. Try to give a deeper perspective about the feeling of 'alone' so it does not look stiff and mediocre.
Overall, I enjoyed reading the poem. You have a good idea to point up your messages and I see the potential from you. Keep writing!

lovely short poem that mean alot, cs most of people feel the same way, lonely and sad, i liked when you said

"I sit here...

Alone...

I cry here...

Alone...

I look out the window, at the world outside...

Alone...

I sing to myself...

Alone..."
keep writting and you won't feel alone anymore

Hey there. When I read your poem, I saw myself locked up in my room just looking at the window while raindrops raced down the windowsill and when something like that happens to me, it means you've touched a part of my soul that once felt the same.
Your poem was really beautiful and you've mirrored the perfect image of everyone who have been, but afraid to admit it, alone and lost.
The only correction is:

"But now I alone..."

should be:

"But now I'm alone..."

That's all and thank you for a lovely poem.