Inked

Inked here for a review! Okay Abbyowl, your goal was to personify fear and I believe you hit your mark. You did a great job of this, but I want ...

hello there! Inked here after her long journey from who knows where, here to review. So I see that you wrote of an imaginary friend. I thought it was nice ...

This is Inked here for my last and Final review. This poem has so much potential. It is not a new concept on the contrary, it is rather overused. You ...

This has a lot of typos, and it sounds really unedited. It sounds like a first attempt. You should try to include more emotion, you are a painter, but you ...

It was sweet, it had a story, but for me it was almost incomplete. they were pretty words. Relatable in a way. They were nice. I liked the way it ...

This was intresting. Taking the story of Adam and Eve and twisting it. It was scary to me at first. I wasn't sure whatvi was diving into, but you did ...

In the first paragraph, you put, the first rather than, the first time. In the second paragraph, you mention , clear blue eyes. I personally love describing eyes, you can ...

This was a pretty piece. I don't see anything wrong with it. I who don't have the need for glasses can't relate, but the words you used made me feel ...

I figure this is just me, but is Nazza a girl? On to the review. It was a good start the plot was plausible, it drew me in. I was ...

This made me feel. I can honestly say I liked it. It spoke to me, it was beautiful. I do suggest making it longer, only because I want to hear ...

You can probably tell this better by making us feel what it is like to be on the other end. Use your words, but don't rant. Rants aren't really a ...

I have never in my life read a poem like this.(that is a compliment. It is so perfect! I love it. The concept. The everything! I think you could add ...

This was pretty. It was also simplistic. It was written majestically, but it was only a single image. I liked it. I feel like I was viewing a piece of ...

In the beginning paragraph you lost me, for me the wording of the first two sentences was really good, but then it got all crazy. the description you give of ...

Not at all what I suspected. I love the Mongols, and you depicted a more humane part of them. When I saw that it was something written for school I ...