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Re: Wis-per Chapters 6-7
Hey there Anma! I didn't even realize this was out! Sorry about that! This one is just as good as the last ones. (Just so ya know, I hope Hadley ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: Servant of the White Sun - Chapter 2 - Shelter of the Sun
I seriously can't even express how much your writing is AMAZING! I literally love your style. It just sucks me and won't let go. It's like one of those really ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: Why, Internet?
Hey Jade! This is obviously very relatable and pretty funny! It's a good (nice) way of saying you love\hate the Internet! Nothing jumped out at me that I would need ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: Gleamwood - Chapter 1
Hey Pomeroy! I actually started reading this and then I got pulled away and I completely forgot to come back to review! My apologies lol So, I only found a ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: fragmented like my self-esteem
Hey niteowl! (love your username by the way ;)) So, I'm not sure if I've ever reviewed your work so I will tell you now that I don't know much ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: Wis-per Chapter 4-5
Hey Anma! I'm back for another review! :) I'm glad to see that this one is better then the last ones! It means you're improving ;) Review time... One thing ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: Exit 11 - Chapter 1
Hey Pomeroy! So, I really like this! My general review format is I tell you what I think needs editing so that I can leave you with the positive! ;) ...
Apr 6, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 3 Wis-per
Hey Anma! So like I said in my past review, you need to work on your present/past tense. It's not too bad in this one but you still need to ...
Apr 6, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 2 Wis-per
Sorry I didn't get here sooner! I haven't had a chance to get on the computer and reviewing on a phone is a pain! Anyway, review time! *rubs hands together ...
Apr 6, 2019 -
Re: Bonetaker Chapter 3
OHMYGOSH!!! I literally hate you! (Not in a literal sense lol) I am so intrigued! Can you please just keep writing!? I order you to forget about your own life ...
Apr 6, 2019 -
Re: Gateway (Downtown)
Hey Anma! Here for that review I promised! I literally say this EVERY time I review poetry so you may have seen this before. Oh well. I don't know much ...
Apr 5, 2019 -
Re: Servant of the White Sun - Chapter 1 - Shelter of the Sun
Hi Pap! This caught my eye because for one, it actually has a title and for two, its the first chapter. I usually like to come into a story at ...
Apr 5, 2019 -
Re: movement
Hi again! I am literally just binge reviewing your stuff :) This was really good just like all your other work. I don't know how you do it but I ...
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: The Homeless
Hi there! :) In general this was a really good poem. To me, the most important part of a poem is the massage behind it and how strong it is. ...
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: lover
Hi 4revgreen! :) Back for another review! This is really good. I find it really captivating! It all flowed so well and I didn’t have to reread anything! I usually ...
Apr 3, 2019
