Holiday30

Okay, I love the story and I don't know why everyone is saying that your story didn't have enough details, when it did. Don't get me wrong, I fell like ...

First I would like to say farewell to my friend Tuesday, I hope you do get to see this because i want you to know just cus you have to ...

So this is my first review on your page, and I have to tell you I like this story......I would love to read more and see how this story will ...

.....Yep you did it. Lol I am now officially scared of the creativity of your mind. I mean when I read the ending it really did bring tears to my ...

Okay chapter six was awesome. I don't know if I got the wrong message here but even though Kevin and Meghan go out I still got this vibe that Yukio ...

Hey, bro loved chapter five and I have to say.....I got a new favorite character. I love Yggdrasil, I think mostly because of her mysterious ways. You know what I ...

Lol, why do I feel like Jesus was talking to me right then. Any who this Kwanza, A.k.a Holiday, B.k.a your Capt. here speaking and let me be the first ...

Okay this story is steadily getting better which is what I like. I hope my boy Kevin keeps his nose clean and not get to cocky with his powers. Because ...

Chapter 3........I have to agree with Chaser, I felt there was a lot of details missing. Lots of action which is cool but I felt like you could have added ...

Lol I feel the suspense in the air, but not fear like the first part to this story. But whatever because it still have captivating words that kept me question ...

Awesome chapter. As I read more I can see myself being Kevin. However my Favorite charter is Meghan. I know you said Kevin is smart, and I know he is ...

First I must tell you, if you are going for mysterious and creepy you defiantly did the thing with that paragraph.......I hate horror books cause of my vivid imagination....lol not ...

This poem makes me want to go find a rainbow.......lol I like it, I like it a lot. This poem speaks to me on a different level and to me ...

Hey I finally got a round to reading chapter 1.......love it man, and your boy Kev, man is a real lady killer....Got three of the villages strongest women want to ...