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Re: <Legacy Of The Multiverse: Trial Of Spirit> Part-1
Hello! My name is Hope. First thing I want to compliment you on your first try. This is a great first try! Its also incredibly long, most of the time ...
Oct 2, 2025 -
Re: Fanmade Hamilton Song
Hello! So this is really good I could def hear the voices of the actors when i was reading it, the biggest issue was it was kind of hard to ...
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Re: america the home of the hate
hello i was just scrolling and figured i'd get this out of the greenroom. Please note that this review is solely on the writing and structure of the poem, along ...
Sep 12, 2025 -
Re: Laughing Jack’s proxy pledge
hello! Alright, So I only know a little bit about laughing jack, so I may be missing somethings or be completely wrong, but i googled what a proxy pledge was, ...
Sep 4, 2025 -
Re: Infinitas [Classical Latin Cover For Infinity by Jaymes Young]
Hello This is very cool. I don't speak Latin, but I do think I am a bit more familiar with it than the average person, and its a real shame ...
Sep 4, 2025 -
Re: Caspar’s death
Hello~ its been a long while since I've done a review, and I thought this was the perfect little story to get back into it. Now i haven't read the ...
Sep 4, 2025 -
Re: 🎪🎠 The original Elsdale Circus cast and crew 🎠🎪
Hope here! Fun little poem. I've read some of your other circus stuff Vamp but not recently so its kind of fun to pop back in every once and a ...
Jun 10, 2025 -
Re: two weeks later, the survivors have nothing new to say
Whoa. How has this been in the green room for so long? Typically poems clear out pretty fast. Its a very visercal poem. Its unclear if the POV character woke ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: Unga
Heya! Hope here with a review! So i really like the creativity of this poem. You can really feel the emoiton of the POV character. The start of the poem, ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: Teratophilia Nina
Heya! Hope here for a review! This poem is very relatable but I do have a few things to point out. There doesnt seem to be much of a rhyme ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: Questions That keeps ME up
Heya! Hope here with a review! Questions, and more questions. Your rhyme scheme is good and your beat is pretty consistant. The POV character does a good job of expressing ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: Just Married
Heya hope here with a review BWAHAHAHA this is so freaking funny. I started laughing in my living room. This feels like the start of a webtoon. Can you freaking ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: Somewhere, you hold me.
Heya! Hope here with a review. You dont see too much stuff playing with images here, so I had to give this one a looksie. It is generally simple, but ...
May 31, 2025 -
Re: My Dark Angel: part of chapter 1
Hello! I see multiple problems just starting off, but the subject matter is strong and i want it to be clear that I am pointing these out so you can ...
May 14, 2025 -
Re: Upon Wide Seas - A shanty
Hello! I've never seen a sea shanty on here, so i just had to give it a look. The Bad: One of the problems with posting a song in just ...
May 13, 2025