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HikariHateke

  • Poetry » General, General Re: [Those three in the backdrop of the cafe scene --]

    Hello Hikari here with a review! I really like the first stanza {Always, tea time with friends, even if you're a coffee drinker, then -- you're not anymore. Under the ...

    Sep 10, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tiny Epiphanies

    Hello, Hikari here with a review! Aw this was so sweet and I totally relate to this especially when the person is so interesting and you just want to know ...

    Sep 10, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The spring of my senses

    Hello, Hikari here with a review! Let's get right to it shall we? {Waiting, I still wonder How can I be smiling Just by thinking of you.} I liked this ...

    Sep 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Brave Against a Beast

    Hello hikari here with a review! I really loved this its so creative, I'd never have thought to make a poem based off a roblox game but your poem here ...

    Sep 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: I'm Not

    Hello Hikari here with a review! Here's what I have to say: {I'm not the one you're looking for. She's around the bend and through the door.} I love this ...

    Sep 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Tiny bits of you

    Hello hikarihateke here with a review! Aw what a lovely lil love poem here you have! However I feel the word 'your' is a bit overused? But I totally get ...

    Sep 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Shell

    Hi, hikarihateke here with a review! Firstly this was just amazing! this poem took me from my house, sent me to the beach and replaced my pj's with a float ...

    Sep 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Road Trip

    Hello! Hikarihateke here with a review! I think this was lovely! And as someone with a big family I totally related to it (I mean anyone who's been on a ...

    Sep 6, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Teachers' Day

    Hey kari leaving ya a review! Your teacher is going to love this poem its so Beautiful! I love how well it flows! [But there's more to teachers than just ...

    Sep 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Forevermore

    Hi kari here with a review! Oh just looking at the title and discrimination I thought it was going to be good and man was I not disappointed! I love ...

    Aug 31, 2021
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Scroll That is History

    Hi! Kari here with a review! Oml I loved this song much! 'While some is pristine, Some’s covered in mud.' I think this lines my favorite it just flows so ...

    Aug 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: how many eldest daughters

    Hey Kari here with a review! God as an eldest daughter (and grandkid AND cousin) I related to this song much "how many eldest daughters have turned to the overflowing ...

    Aug 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the smashing of butterfly wings

    Hey! 👋🏽 Kari here with a long review This was really good! "the silk edges of alternate realities" Oh this line sent me small chills, a great start! gently flap ...

    Aug 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: No Longer Flowing

    Oh Lord this was such a mood! I haven't been able to write over 209 words in a sitting for over a month now and it is super frustrating! "The ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Buy Bread

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    Hey Kari here with a review! This was a good read, it sorta reminded me of the boxcar children in a way. Though I noticed that amy could say 'lion' ...

    Aug 8, 2021


For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle