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Re: [Those three in the backdrop of the cafe scene --]
Hello Hikari here with a review! I really like the first stanza {Always, tea time with friends, even if you're a coffee drinker, then -- you're not anymore. Under the ...
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: Tiny Epiphanies
Hello, Hikari here with a review! Aw this was so sweet and I totally relate to this especially when the person is so interesting and you just want to know ...
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: The spring of my senses
Hello, Hikari here with a review! Let's get right to it shall we? {Waiting, I still wonder How can I be smiling Just by thinking of you.} I liked this ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: Brave Against a Beast
Hello hikari here with a review! I really loved this its so creative, I'd never have thought to make a poem based off a roblox game but your poem here ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: I'm Not
Hello Hikari here with a review! Here's what I have to say: {I'm not the one you're looking for. She's around the bend and through the door.} I love this ...
Sep 8, 2021 -
Re: Tiny bits of you
Hello hikarihateke here with a review! Aw what a lovely lil love poem here you have! However I feel the word 'your' is a bit overused? But I totally get ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Shell
Hi, hikarihateke here with a review! Firstly this was just amazing! this poem took me from my house, sent me to the beach and replaced my pj's with a float ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Road Trip
Hello! Hikarihateke here with a review! I think this was lovely! And as someone with a big family I totally related to it (I mean anyone who's been on a ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Teachers' Day
Hey kari leaving ya a review! Your teacher is going to love this poem its so Beautiful! I love how well it flows! [But there's more to teachers than just ...
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: Forevermore
Hi kari here with a review! Oh just looking at the title and discrimination I thought it was going to be good and man was I not disappointed! I love ...
Aug 31, 2021 -
Re: The Scroll That is History
Hi! Kari here with a review! Oml I loved this song much! 'While some is pristine, Some’s covered in mud.' I think this lines my favorite it just flows so ...
Aug 21, 2021 -
Re: how many eldest daughters
Hey Kari here with a review! God as an eldest daughter (and grandkid AND cousin) I related to this song much "how many eldest daughters have turned to the overflowing ...
Aug 15, 2021 -
Re: the smashing of butterfly wings
Hey! 👋🏽 Kari here with a long review This was really good! "the silk edges of alternate realities" Oh this line sent me small chills, a great start! gently flap ...
Aug 15, 2021 -
Re: No Longer Flowing
Oh Lord this was such a mood! I haven't been able to write over 209 words in a sitting for over a month now and it is super frustrating! "The ...
Aug 12, 2021 -
Re: To Buy Bread
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Aug 8, 2021
Hey Kari here with a review! This was a good read, it sorta reminded me of the boxcar children in a way. Though I noticed that amy could say 'lion' ...
