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Re: i wish my youth would last just one heartbeat longer
your title was what spoke to me and pulled me in, I wasnt disappointed this is amazing and definitely relatable. Growing up feels so slow and then all of a ...
Oct 21, 2022 -
Re: The Stinging Tang
Hello Hikari here with a review! Let's get right into it. I'm not entirely sure what the [. . .] meant but I liked the rest of the poem! The ...
Sep 23, 2021 -
Re: Fall.
Hello Hikari here with a review! Let's get right into it shall we? Huh this is very unique when I first clicked on this I was expecting something to do ...
Sep 23, 2021 -
Re: Enslaved
Hello Hikari here with a review! Let's jump right in. I love the title you choose for this work it really works well with your story and emphasizes the theme. ...
Sep 20, 2021 -
Re: I am the Invisible
Hello, Hikari here with a review let's get started shall we? I love the emotion behind your work, I also like your title it fits well with your story. {I ...
Sep 20, 2021 -
Re: Nonsense
Hello Hikari here with a review! Honestly the title didn't prepare me at all for this poem, its fun and silly and weird and I love it! {And then came ...
Sep 19, 2021 -
Re: hunger
Hello, Hikari here with a review! To begin with I love the title of your work it goes well with the vibe and overall theme of your poem. Secondly I ...
Sep 19, 2021 -
Re: Into the Unknown
Hello! Hikari here with a review! Let's get right into it shall we? My first impression was that this was gonna be something frozen related lol but you surprised me ...
Sep 19, 2021 -
Re: pantheon
Hello, Hikari here with a review! Let's get right into it shall we? First of all I love the title of your work 'pantheon' I did have to look up ...
Sep 17, 2021 -
Re: For all the times
Hello Hikari here with a review! Let's get right into it shall we? This comes off as less of a poem and more like a toast, like something the someone ...
Sep 17, 2021 -
Re: Magic and numbers
Hello Hikari here with a review! Let's get right into it shall we? I like the title 'magic and Numbers' its simple but goes well with the theme! The poem ...
Sep 15, 2021 -
Re: For the booklovers
Hello Hikari here with a review! Let's jump right in shall we? I loved this poem everything about it spoke to me on that level that all book lovers know. ...
Sep 15, 2021 -
Re: Fade
Hello, Hikari here with a review! First I love the name you gave this poem it goes really well with the theme (names are always hard to come up with ...
Sep 14, 2021 -
Re: The Blood Witch
Hello, Hikari here with a review; let's jump right into it shall we? {The shards of glass glitter in the gloom, The only source of light in the room. My ...
Sep 12, 2021 -
Re: s c a r e d
Hello, Hikari here with a review! First I think the name fits your poem and the theme perfectly and how you put a space between each letters for that really ...
Sep 12, 2021
