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  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: i wish my youth would last just one heartbeat longer

    your title was what spoke to me and pulled me in, I wasnt disappointed this is amazing and definitely relatable. Growing up feels so slow and then all of a ...

    Oct 21, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Stinging Tang

    Hello Hikari here with a review! Let's get right into it. I'm not entirely sure what the [. . .] meant but I liked the rest of the poem! The ...

    Sep 23, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fall.

    Hello Hikari here with a review! Let's get right into it shall we? Huh this is very unique when I first clicked on this I was expecting something to do ...

    Sep 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Enslaved

    Hello Hikari here with a review! Let's jump right in. I love the title you choose for this work it really works well with your story and emphasizes the theme. ...

    Sep 20, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I am the Invisible

    Hello, Hikari here with a review let's get started shall we? I love the emotion behind your work, I also like your title it fits well with your story. {I ...

    Sep 20, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Fantasy Re: Nonsense

    Hello Hikari here with a review! Honestly the title didn't prepare me at all for this poem, its fun and silly and weird and I love it! {And then came ...

    Sep 20, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: hunger

    Hello, Hikari here with a review! To begin with I love the title of your work it goes well with the vibe and overall theme of your poem. Secondly I ...

    Sep 19, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Into the Unknown

    Hello! Hikari here with a review! Let's get right into it shall we? My first impression was that this was gonna be something frozen related lol but you surprised me ...

    Sep 19, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: pantheon

    Hello, Hikari here with a review! Let's get right into it shall we? First of all I love the title of your work 'pantheon' I did have to look up ...

    Sep 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: For all the times

    Hello Hikari here with a review! Let's get right into it shall we? This comes off as less of a poem and more like a toast, like something the someone ...

    Sep 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Mystery / Suspense Re: Magic and numbers

    Hello Hikari here with a review! Let's get right into it shall we? I like the title 'magic and Numbers' its simple but goes well with the theme! The poem ...

    Sep 16, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: For the booklovers

    Hello Hikari here with a review! Let's jump right in shall we? I loved this poem everything about it spoke to me on that level that all book lovers know. ...

    Sep 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Fade

    Hello, Hikari here with a review! First I love the name you gave this poem it goes really well with the theme (names are always hard to come up with ...

    Sep 14, 2021
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: The Blood Witch

    Hello, Hikari here with a review; let's jump right into it shall we? {The shards of glass glitter in the gloom, The only source of light in the room. My ...

    Sep 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: s c a r e d

    Hello, Hikari here with a review! First I think the name fits your poem and the theme perfectly and how you put a space between each letters for that really ...

    Sep 12, 2021


The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
— Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians