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Re: Dark
This was strangely appealing. It was really good, I didn't see anything that I think should be changed. I like your choice of words. I really like these two lines: ...
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: Him
Wow this was really amazing. I love your imagery and word choice. Everything seemed to flow very magically in my opinion. I didn't notice any errors at all and I ...
Oct 10, 2014 -
Re: You Are Stronger
I really like what you did here. I have a huge heart, I will try and help as many strangers as I can from ending their lives, so this spoke ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: What have we come to?
Let me start by saying I really liked this because it was good, it flowed nicely and after reading a second time made much more sense to me. Agreeing with ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: When Two Hearts Collide
Wow this was absolutely magical. Everything seemed to flow nicely together.I don't notice and major or minor mistakes, kudos to you. I love love love the way you used your ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: Leaky Voices
Usually I'm pretty good at uncovering poems but this one has got me stuck. It was very well written, don't get me wrong, I just have a very hard time ...
Sep 23, 2014 -
Re: If a Rose..
For as simple as just looking at a rose and coming up with this seems this poem is simply amazing. I love the way you compared it to musical instruments. ...
Sep 22, 2014 -
Re: a thousand somersaults
Hi, my names Andy and I'm so in love with this. It is stinking adorable and I love the way you rhyme. Every time I rhyme no one likes it ...
Sep 22, 2014 -
Re: Those chains
Wow, I don't even know how to approach this. Although it did seem a little scattered everywhere it makes sense. I suffer from acute anxiety and so I can understand. ...
Sep 22, 2014 -
Re: How do I explain it?
Okay the second to last line should say "not" you have no. I found this rather random but then I feel like that makes sense because of the title of ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: Feeling SAD
Wow, I really touched by this. I suffer from social anxiety so I can totally relate to every single word. For not even paying attention to the writing bit this ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: Red Leather
To start let me say I really like this poem. It was very well written and you have very nice word usage. Unlike redbox275 I totally understood what you were ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: txting with girlfriend
This was the cutest freaking thing I've ever seen. My boyfriend isn't random with me like that unless we're in person or something, so like this is the greatest. Is ...
Sep 8, 2014 -
Re: Overdose
I really liked this, it was so real and true. There are so many people who go through this and never say anything about it. Same thing happen to my ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Beauty and Poison
Love love love the title it drew me in and I had to know more. The whole time I was reading I kept thinking wow is this person conceited or ...
Sep 7, 2014
