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HiImAndy

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Grammatically Speaking

    Hi, Andy here! As someone who doesn't take criticism all to well, I'm not here to criticize. I also believe that poetry is meant to be portrayed however the author ...

    Mar 3, 2017
  • Other » Other, Lyrical Re: Chances

    As a girl, I love romance, obviously and "D_______ S____ W___" is SO lucky to have you. This was absolutely magical and it made me long for that ability. The ...

    Aug 7, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: Depression

    Depression is word I try to avoid, not believing that that's what's "wrong" with me. But here I am feeling the same as you're little piece and somehow I still ...

    Aug 7, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: A Rough Day or Maybe a Normal One

    Never in my life would I have thought I'd be able to agree to this feeling but here I am agreeing. Feeling like this everyday now. There's times when I'm ...

    Aug 7, 2015
  • Other » General, Literature Re: Commitment

    Hi Andy here to leave a nice little review. I really liked this piece. In my opinion it was very well written. I feel like there should be some kind ...

    Aug 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Tragedy

    OhMyGosh. That was so sad. Your writing is really good. You had me hooked from the very beginning and it's hard for me to get hooked so easily. I like ...

    Mar 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Maybe We're Alike

    Andy here for a little review. All I can say at the moment is.. Wow. This was absolutely amazing in my own opinion. I've never actually seen or heard of ...

    Mar 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: The time I'll leave you...

    I absolutely love this! The words were amazing and touched my heart on so many levels. I didn't notice anything that needed to be fixed, it was perfect. Heartache seems ...

    Mar 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Known Unknown

    This was seriously amazing! Like wow, I wish I could capture moments and put them into words like this. How do you do it, honestly? There are no errors of ...

    Feb 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Give me Peace

    I really liked this. There was something about it that just touched my heart. Your word choice was absolutely amazing in my opinion and I loved how you rhymed the ...

    Feb 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: 3 Years Gone

    Hi, I'm Andy and I'm here to give you a review! :) I loved it! I loved the feel of the poem and the imagery. I didn't notice anything grammatically ...

    Jan 16, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Paradise

    Hi, I'm Andy and I'm here to review your work! :) I loved this so much. The imagery was perfection in my opinion. Your word choice was beautiful. It reminds ...

    Jan 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: Prologue (please tell me the option you prefer)

    As I promised Andy here to give you a review! This was very good, a little hard for me to get into in the beginning but then I just had ...

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, General Re: Pupz

    The meaning behind the poem was very heart warming. However, I see some things that could probably be changed for the best but it's entirely up to you. "I am ...

    Nov 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: A few weirdo shorts :P

    This just left an ache in my heart and I think I'm about to cry. Like I want that so bad! I've thought I've had it but I was definitely ...

    Nov 9, 2014


When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind