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Re: Grammatically Speaking
Hi, Andy here! As someone who doesn't take criticism all to well, I'm not here to criticize. I also believe that poetry is meant to be portrayed however the author ...
Mar 3, 2017 -
Re: Chances
As a girl, I love romance, obviously and "D_______ S____ W___" is SO lucky to have you. This was absolutely magical and it made me long for that ability. The ...
Aug 7, 2015 -
Re: Depression
Depression is word I try to avoid, not believing that that's what's "wrong" with me. But here I am feeling the same as you're little piece and somehow I still ...
Aug 7, 2015 -
Re: A Rough Day or Maybe a Normal One
Never in my life would I have thought I'd be able to agree to this feeling but here I am agreeing. Feeling like this everyday now. There's times when I'm ...
Aug 7, 2015 -
Re: Commitment
Hi Andy here to leave a nice little review. I really liked this piece. In my opinion it was very well written. I feel like there should be some kind ...
Aug 7, 2015 -
Re: Tragedy
OhMyGosh. That was so sad. Your writing is really good. You had me hooked from the very beginning and it's hard for me to get hooked so easily. I like ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: Maybe We're Alike
Andy here for a little review. All I can say at the moment is.. Wow. This was absolutely amazing in my own opinion. I've never actually seen or heard of ...
Mar 19, 2015 -
Re: The time I'll leave you...
I absolutely love this! The words were amazing and touched my heart on so many levels. I didn't notice anything that needed to be fixed, it was perfect. Heartache seems ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: The Known Unknown
This was seriously amazing! Like wow, I wish I could capture moments and put them into words like this. How do you do it, honestly? There are no errors of ...
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: Give me Peace
I really liked this. There was something about it that just touched my heart. Your word choice was absolutely amazing in my opinion and I loved how you rhymed the ...
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: 3 Years Gone
Hi, I'm Andy and I'm here to give you a review! :) I loved it! I loved the feel of the poem and the imagery. I didn't notice anything grammatically ...
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: Paradise
Hi, I'm Andy and I'm here to review your work! :) I loved this so much. The imagery was perfection in my opinion. Your word choice was beautiful. It reminds ...
Jan 15, 2015 -
Re: Prologue (please tell me the option you prefer)
As I promised Andy here to give you a review! This was very good, a little hard for me to get into in the beginning but then I just had ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Pupz
The meaning behind the poem was very heart warming. However, I see some things that could probably be changed for the best but it's entirely up to you. "I am ...
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: A few weirdo shorts :P
This just left an ache in my heart and I think I'm about to cry. Like I want that so bad! I've thought I've had it but I was definitely ...
Nov 9, 2014
