Haven

Hey, hello, hello, hello!! Okay straight to it. So I think it's really good and you should start doing chapters for your novel. From reading your Prologue I think it ...

Okay, be honest, I really like your story so far. Normally I wouldn't find much interest reading something in a journal style story, mostly because some WOULD write it like ...

Hmmm. I have to say I'm quite impressed with the depth of detail into the gore factor that's put into the story as well as the insight shown from the ...

Hey, hello, hi!! Okay so looking this over and I thought it was wonderful I kind of got chills running up and down my spine reading it. But I think ...

Hello!!! Okay so I am now a big fan of this story, just have to say!!! I love the unknown to the beginning of this story, like you know what ...

It's a very interesting story I like it. It kind of reminds me of the movie "The House At The End Of The Street". Good movie as well. But the ...

Hey, hey, hey!! Okay so first of all thanks for following me and second like your poem. It holds a lot of meaning just by the choice of words you ...

Okay so I like your second chapter. It's not as long as the first chapter but it has great detail from what Courtney is seeing and doing, it's like turning ...

Oh wow so much emotion it almost made me cry. It was beautiful and sad all at once. I could see and feel the pain a desire in this poem ...

I love it, love it, love it!! Your spelling is great, grammar and punctuation is wonderful and the rhyming is very catchy. I also love the emotion that just flows ...

Ello Animal, I have to say this is a very well put poem. The emotion is very real and put out there. This poem just gets people because this is ...

Hey great job on your first post and welcome to YWS!! So far I think your story is great. I love the amount of detail you put into your first ...

So far I love it. But at the beginning I was a bit lost. You started at a third person's point of view and then went straight to first person's. ...

I love it!! The suspense in what's and not knowing what going on but at the same time you do. I can just feel the frustration and fear Kassa and ...

Ello! So I really like it. You said that you not much of a poet well I think it's really good. I'm not every good at poetry myself but I ...