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Hi Kanome! I'm here to review your work (obviously) :D I really liked this and, with a few corrections, I'm sure it can be even better. Let's get on to ...

Hey Emerald! Finally got around to reviewing this, and wow... Lots going on! XD I really like it but there's just so much happening that it can be a little ...

Hi Odd! (I keep wanting to call you Ood) I was looking for something for my second-to-last review until my next star and saw that you'd posted another work. Yay! ...

Hi Authorian! Amazing piece here, I really liked it. Everything from the way it was written to the plot and premise of the story was incredible. The idea of people ...

Hi steam! Nice little story you have here, I really enjoyed reading it. As for it apparently being your first post... Wha-? Why? This is usually where I'd start going ...

Hi Cay, Jules here for a review! First off, this is an incredibly short story. Not that that's a problem, it's just the shortest non-poem I've seen on YWS so ...

Hi EPIC! I don't normally review poetry but I read yours so I might as well review it :P And the beat of the lightening The lightening and thunder are ...

Hi Cap! Bit of a religious story you've got here... Not really my type but I'll review it nonetheless! Let's get to the grammar. I looked out of my car ...

Hi Falco! Interesting beginning you have here, and I'm interested in seeing what the flicker was all about/what it means. Shall we get to the grammar part now? "We need ...

Demons! Monsters! Evil creatures! Just kidding, but I really wasn't expecting to see something like this o.o It's a bit ironic that you wrote about Satan when your name is ...

I don't usually review poetry, or read it for that matter, but I saw this in the Green Room a little while ago and decided I might as well. From ...

This was not what I expected it to be after reading the title, but I do like the idea. The "life" cycle of a raindrop. I enjoyed reading this quite ...

This was great! The title, description, and finally story were all incredibly interesting. I also love the way you write, though there were a few mistakes. The first of which ...

First off, wow. This was one of the best short stories I've read on here in a while, mostly I just see poems or really long chapters in the 40s ...

*applauds* Very good, very good indeed! I'm glad I could understand the gaming lingo used here, and I didn't dislike this poem like most I read. The only thing that ...