Hassanfs

Hello! This was a good read. There did seem to be a few typos. "I scream as he plunges it into his chest, but not sound comes out." Shouldn't it ...

this was a very short poem. But in these few lines you made your point. After reading this a few times, I still couldn't understand whether you were talking about ...

Helooo. Welcome to YWS! What drew me to your poem was the description. I like the poem, but well have some issues with it. It didn't feel like a poem. ...

This was a beautiful poem. Just like somebody said below, I felt like I was the one looking into the mirror and staring back at myself. Related to it very ...

Wow. Okay WOW!! Soo many feels packed into just four lines. FOUR LINES!!! This is amazing. The breaks after each line are very effective. This is as perfect as it ...

I felt like dancing after reading this, although dancing by yourself invites a lot of stares. .-. It got me in the swirling around by myself mode, so you must ...

Helloo. Hassan here with a review. Hehe. That rhymes. Well kinda.. .-. Anyways I'll get started on this before I start talking to myself again. :D WOW. You have an ...

This was a very good poem. I loved the imagery you created in the first stanza. The second one was equally good but for different reasons. While the first one ...

Helloo. Hassan here with a review. So I have mixed feeling about this. I get the romantic and the horror vibe in it. Your descriptions were good and the imagery ...

Hellooo. Welcome to YWS! This was an intriguing piece. The title itself had that pull towards me. I enjoyed reading it. There weren't any typos or grammatical errors, at least ...

Wow this is very good :) It described writer's block beautifully and I loved it. The alternate rhymes were done very well and the flow was well distributed. However you ...

Hi. I did not really understand what this poem was about, but I really liked the vibe it possessed. Your wording was very good and you have a different style ...

This was wonderful! The flow was good throughout this. The rhyming was good, but I did think that it wasn't consistent enough. There were several instances where I was expecting ...

This was an interesting poem. I liked how it seemed that the narrator was confined to the chair. The feeling of being trapped and bound to it's presence was very ...

Okay. I'm still reeling from the after effects of reading this. This is probably one of the best poems I've read. The way it was so raw with emotion, and ...