Hassanfs

HAHHAHHAAHA. WUTT BUTT CAVES IN?? :P That made erupt into hysterical laughter :P *wipes away tear* Ram in my dodge . ahahahah priceless and the Adam Sandler bit as well ...

HAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA OK. THE END WAS SOOO EPIC. that blinking, the confusion. The teacher AHAHHAHAHAHHA the twist was epic. I'd suggest you to make the spencer's "tale" a bit more directed ...

Hahahahaa. Supernatural fan fiction :D I loved how you maintained the relation between the brothers. Dean was just like Dean. Sam I think was a bit too...i don't know the ...

Hello. Hassan here with a review. I liked the flow in this poem. The line length was consistent and this made the poem flow beautifully. I just feel that you ...

Hassan here with a review. I like the theme this poem has. Venturing into the unknown, and realising how vastly unprepared you are for what lies ahead. And being content ...

Hello. I'll review this as I read along. So the first paragraph has too many 'but' s in it. Try replacing it with another word. There was a sentence that ...

Hellooo...again You must be getting tired of me and my stupid reviews :P This was an interesting read. It didn't sound like a poem, more of a song, but maybe ...

Helloo again :P I loved the title. Fits perfectly. I don't get the "long version" bit. Like is it a continuation, an after thought, a different perspective. But I like ...

Hellooo. I loved this poem. Loved the vibe running through it. The way you drafted the analogies towards the end was amazing. The flow is good, but I'd suggest you ...

Wow. This is one of those things that I always want to write, but cant get my head to calm down to write. All the feelings, the anger, the confusion, ...

Hellooo. Hassan here with a review. I get what this is about. I can relate to it perfectly and feel the various emotions running through this poem. You started off ...

Helloooo. I've never read a poem written by two people so this will be interesting :D So firstly. I LOVED the imagery. The first stanza painted this beautiful picture in ...

Hellooo. So there are two things that I liked immediately about this poem. The length, and the title. The short length of the poem makes it better, I think, but ...

Hellooooo This was a good poem. I liked the imagery you created. The flow was consistent. It ended with the same pace that it started, and I liked that. I've ...

Helloo. Hassan here with a review :) So this poem, and I don't know why, made me very sad. It felt like a painful reminder of how free and wonderful ...