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Re: A Pinch of Sacrifice
Hi laminated! I'm hanorah and I'm here to review your poem today! First of all,I liked your poem very much and enjoyed reading it! My favourite bit was 'all the ...
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: The Magic Recipe!
Hi Shiksha! I'm hanorah and I'll be reviewing your poem today ;). First of all,I love love love love this poem,it's sooo cute xD.Its written well,considering you were in 5th ...
Jun 17, 2013 -
Re: The Joy of Pain
Hi aouther2b! I'm hanorah and I will be reviewing your poem 'the joy of pain' today ;). First of all,I would like to say well done on this poem.Your use ...
Jun 17, 2013 -
Re: Im me
Hi smile123! I'm hanorah and I'll be reviewing your poem. First of all,well done,this poem has true meaning as people go through this every day and it can go un ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: Happiness
Hi chuck10931! I'm hanorah and I'll be reviewing your poem today! I really Liked this and enjoyed reading it.Choise of words were quite good,the poem flowed well,which some poets find ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: shadow of doubts
Hi smile123! I'm Hanorah and I'll be reviewing your poem today! I really liked this poem,as a lot of people would be able to relate to it in many ways,it ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: I am No Hero
Hi tgirly! I'm hanorah and I'll be reviewing your poem today ;) First off,I love love love this soo much.I think everyone can relate to this in someway. My favourite ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: Humans
Hey mayyda! I'm hanorah and I'll be reviewing your poem today ;). I have to say well done first is pretty much summing up this world of seven billion people ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: The Boy
Hi emochick! I'm hanorah and I'll be reviewing your poem today! First of all,I would like to say hands down,well done.Most people wouldent take this angle of things when making ...
Jun 16, 2013 -
Re: Ten past four.
Hello Blackwood! I'm hanorah and I'll be reviewing your poem! My thoughts go out to your situation if this is based on your personal experience :( I liked how this ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Eden
Hi fortis, I'm Hanorah and ill be reviewing your poem today! I really liked this poem, It was quite fascinating and descriptive. I have no idea why it's called Eden ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: you...
Hello panda, Im hanorah and I'll be reviewing your poem! I liked this poem as its easy to relate to. A lot of people feel lonely and neglected. Maybe you ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: He was the Past, You're my Future
Hi I'm hanorah, And I'm here to review your poem. I really really liked this poem. This will relate to a lot of people I know. Punctuation was good. I ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Saying Goodbye
Hi paula08, This is a very emotional poem and almost leaves you with a lump in your throat,but I still really liked is really good as a lot of people ...
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: Broken Sight
Hi tteele! I liked this poem,it was very good!it was quite emotional,I'm wondering is this from a real life experience?the only constructive critism I have is the punctuation,maybe you could ...
Apr 8, 2013
