Humans

I like this! It's super clever and has a great ring to it. However, your rhyme-scheme is sometimes inconsistent. It may sound better if you had it not rhyme at all. I do like a lot of your poetic language, though. This makes me happy, though. Good job.

Hey mayyda!
I'm hanorah and I'll be reviewing your poem today .
I have to say well done first off.It is pretty much summing up this world of seven billion people in a couple of lines,which is very smart .
I really liked it!it was nice to read and very simple so it doesent get too complicated xD
The only constructive critism I have is with the punctuation,for example at the start it should have been 'the human,a great creation'.
Apart from that it was good I would give it a 7/10,well done!
~bye!
P.s:keep writing poems,you're really good!

Hey there.
In my opinion, it kinda seems as though you're presenting a somewhat untrue portrait of human beings. While you take great care to describe humans as a positive, happy, bright race of people, not enough is done to show many of the other real aspects of human beings. This is ironic considering that you categorized your poem as "realistic" and labelled it "Humans", which is an all encompassing term for both good humans and bad humans. I think more should have been done to include the not so good people in the world, just so the poem can be more accurate and reflect human beings for who they truly are.
However, I must say kudos to you for your subtle interweaving of the concept of time and mortality towards the end of the poem. That was brilliant.

Hey! Nice poem, especially the end- "Time never forgives cunning and mean
Peace lovers and helpers- the evergreen." You have very aptly described the whole of human existence in just a few words. Really good work. The rhyming is great. Cheers!

this is really good! i liked to read it.
i like your choise of words and i like how you have set it out
i also like how u have looked on both sides of the human race, and how everyone reacts to things. i just think it is a great poem and i like all of it!
keep it up! you have real talent

I liked the way you described every function , purpose and way in which a human being presents themselves . I think this is original and is simple yet very thought provoking and meaningful .

I liked the way you started with such a simple statement that sums up the entire poems meaning and ends with such a beautiful and positive outlook our human nature being "peaceful" and "helpful" .

The way you didn't focus on the negativity or the violent nature a human could possess but you rather chose to focus on the strength and the kindness of every human holds within them that helps them to survive .

"Getting things done have brains" - Alas, this make no sense to me.

"Making a world of difference" - Of a* difference, I believe the correct phrasing to be, although this may be optional.

"Many come in a row" is also somewhat confusing.

Aside from that, I somewhat liked, it, although truly I must say that I didn't enjoy the rhythm (it just lacks any kind of metre, which I find takes away from the effect). But it's certainly interesting how you chose to convey your vision of humanity. It differs somewhat from mine, which makes it more fascination :3

So, have fun writing! ^_^