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Hi, Caitlin. Long time no see. I think I remember you a little while back, but you haven't been around in a long time, am I right? Either way, I ...

Hey, this is clearly a first draft, and as such it has some merit, but it's definitely gonna need a little editing. Firstly, consider what you really want to say. ...

I could hear this -- some angry, fast pop song. Now, I've never reviewed song lyrics from you, I don't think, so I don't know your history with writing or ...

Oh my gosh, this is so weird for me to stumble upon, because I was just listening to this video in which the lyrics go something like: You gave me ...

Ooh, Maddy you have a super interesting story going on in here. I first of all am wondering why you didn't try to turn it into a short story or ...

Oh you, this is gorgeous! I love these moment of being poems, because you bring us so entirely into the existence of these two characters -- and that's what reading ...

AHH. I squealed with pleasure after reading through the first stanza!! It was nearly perfect! It was gorgeous and evoked so much, like I couldn't even stand it! It just ...

Hey Payne! This is way too vague. It feels like you want to give us a narrative poem, so why don't you? Instead of dancing around what you obviously know ...

Oh hey, Marauder~ 'Bout time I stumble across something of yours. Look, I've said it over and over again in these forms, so I hope you don't mind if I ...

Hey, back again with some more advice! I'd like to say that this version comes off as more eager to help, which is super inviting to readers and way better ...

Hey, Antonio! Like the concept behind this, but some of it doesn't flow so well for me. For example, why do you have to evoke the image of the night ...

Girl! Leave out the authors note. Present your poem to us and let us decide whether we'd trust you as a poet or not. Don't sell YOURSELF to us. Sell ...

Kylan, I miss your grasslands, but I accept the fact that you've moved on. Do you feel like you are still stumbling through the small-city blocks, or are they becoming ...

Yes, the mention of dreams just makes it feel like we can get into dream interpretation here. Everything seems rather straightforward, if vague, until we get to the ending "and ...

Hey, NightWalker. This poem approaches something haunting, so close that I really want to see it edited and workshopped to perfection, so that's a really good thing. But there are ...